Superman Looks to Adam

Author’s Note: This essay was developed with the assistance of AI. I read or watched every text discussed. The theological framework, arguments, and interpretations are entirely my own. The AI functioned as interlocutor: challenging my readings, identifying gaps in my evidence, and helping me see where my prose had collapsed into very purple flourishes.

The result is something I likely would not have completed alone, not because the AI wrote it, but because it gave me a patient sounding board that helped me see past the tangled ideas to shape what I wanted. If you find a passage that sounds soulless, that might be the AI. If you find one that’s insufferably overwrought, that’s almost certainly me.

What We Remember When We Imagine Heroes

Every person labors under the weight of a heavy burden. They are raised on stories of fathers, grandfathers, leaders, and taught histories of ancestral battles and migrations that led them to the lives and burdens they now carry. Everyone wonders if they can live up to or somehow make up for the events of the past. We bear the weight of history and look to the past as through a tarnished mirror; remembering heroes and seeing ourselves through what remains visible in the murky glass. Memory lingers long in the light that shines through every story we tell. We can see what we value in the assumptions that shape our ideologies, our religions, and even the names we give our children. But beyond those reflections are even deeper whispers of a world that once was, and of a man who once walked in it perfectly in ways we can now only remember in fiction because we can no longer imagine they were ever real.

I speak of course of Adam, the first man. Not a brute creature staggering randomly toward reason as modern materialists imagine, but the living crown of creation: perfect in body, whole in mind, declared good on the sixth day. Made a little lower than the angels, not a rival to God nor mere kin to beast. He named the animals and tended a garden fashioned as his perfect home. He bore glory lightly, as though it were the most natural thing in the universe–because it was. 

Imagine standing in his presence: the most perfect man you can conceive. A man so perfect that your own flaws suddenly unfold into distance you could never cross, widening until they become the whole horizon. Shame and longing hold you fast from even taking a single step toward him. Feel the weight of glory and realize that you are not what man was meant to be. And yet something in you yearns for it. 

But Adam reached for the apple. Not because he was hungry, but because he listened to the serpent and doubted the goodness of the God who had formed him and placed him. Adam’s sin was not that the apple contained evil but that in grasping for what was not yet given he took evil into himself. The fruit, like the garden itself, was doubtless sweet for a moment and then a bitter memory forever after. The light dimmed, the vigor of perfection faded away and the ache of that loss has lived in us ever since.

Part of us remembers what we were, even if we no longer believe such greatness possible. That memory surfaces in every story of heroism, every attempt to imagine the perfect man. We call him Hercules, or Odysseus, or Gilgamesh. In our own age, we call him Superman. We give him flight, strength, incorruptibility—powers that reflect not divinity so much as our lost humanity. We veil him in fiction and send him among us to show what man unfallen might have been. Sometimes we mistake his glory for that of a god. And there is truth in that mistake, for Adam himself pre-figured the God-Man Jesus. But the resemblance is partial, not complete. What we long for in our heroes, and hope for in Christ, is not godhood at all but wholeness and the restoration of what has been squandered.

Superman endures not just because he is an image of Christ, but even more deeply, he reminds us of Adam. He shows us what strength could look like if it served love instead of self and what power paired with integrity could become. He is the memory of man as he was meant to be, transposed into myth by lithographer’s ink, but still carrying the ache of Eden. His goodness is the shadow of a glory we half-remember and dare not hope for.

This is where our story begins: remembrance. To remember Adam rightly is to begin to see the shape of man restored; to glimpse, in myth and modern hero alike, the possibility of something better than self-made gods. It is to stand at the eastward edge of Eden, look up, and believe we were made for more than the dust we came from and to which we are destined to return.

Myths of Memory: Ancient Heroes and the Echo of Adam

There was a time when men still told stories as if they remembered the beginning. Before law was carved in stone or gospel was written on parchment, the world kept its memories in song and spoken tale. Around the firelight of forgotten centuries, voices recalled men who were greater than any we now see, giants in strength and wisdom, and sometimes even in stature. They lived for ages, built the first cities by their skill and toppled them by their pride.

The earliest written fragments echo the same memory though already clouded by centuries of death and forgetting. Across cultures the pattern holds that the first men stood nearer to the beginning and were therefore grander. Zeus stands higher than man and the Titans stand higher even than Zeus. Scripture itself speaks this way. In Genesis the lifespans tower–nine hundred and thirty years for Adam, nine hundred and sixty-nine for Methuselah. Each generation grows shorter as the Fall, Flood and Babel unfold. Civilization rises as man himself diminishes. We invent tools and forge empires even as we forget how to walk with God in the cool of the day. The Sumerian king lists and the flood epics preserve the same memory: greatness lingering as exaggeration once the purpose given to man at the beginning has been forgotten.

From that early twilight of memory come the heroes: Hercules and Gilgamesh, Odysseus and Achilles, Theseus and Thor. All of them half-divine and half-ruined: echoes of the Adamic image carried through myth. Their strength is prodigious, their appetites catastrophic. They rule, they conquer, they stand tall, yet none can escape death’s claim. Each bears the imprint of something once whole and now divided: the might of man without the holiness that made might safe.

Even the world’s first recorded hero-story remembers this truth. In Gilgamesh and Enkidu, we see civilization wrestling with its own loss of innocence, law meeting untamed life. Enkidu, formed from clay and living among beasts, an Adam without naming: near to creation but unable to order it. Gilgamesh rules by force instead of fellowship, a king whose dominion has soured into tyranny. Their quests echo the memory of a dominion once meant for stewardship but twisted into self-glorification. And when Enkidu dies, Gilgamesh confronts the truth Adam faced when he left Eden: man cannot seize eternal life by grasping alone. Together they preserve a dim memory of the unity between man and nature that once was harmony and has since become conflict.

Consider Hercules, the mightiest of the old heroes. A man of impossible strength and relentless will, straining to atone for blood-debt and prove himself worthy to the gods he both fears and resents. His original sin was as grand as his ambition: murdering his own family in a blind fit of rage. Every labor he undertakes is a half-memory of dominion twisted by pride. He slays monsters and cleanses stables but can never cleanse himself. His triumphs are real, yet each victory erodes something of his humanity. He is Adam without grace, muscle without mercy: straining to force his way into heaven. His story ends not in triumph but in fire, and even his ascent to Olympus is a hollow reward, a pagan echo of the resurrection for which creation longs.

Where Hercules embodies the ache of power seeking self-redemption, Arthur stands as Christian civilization’s memory of righteous rule before its corruption. Chosen not by conquest but a divine sign, Arthur does not grasp the apple of the throne until he is confirmed by pulling the sword from the stone. He is the once and future king: a ruler who unites might and right, sword and sacrament. In Arthur we glimpse Adam’s dominion turned to service: strength in obedience, kingship in humility. Yet even Camelot cannot stand. Sin enters through love disordered; pride and betrayal fracture the fellowship of the round table as Lancelot takes what is not his to take. The fall of Arthur’s realm is a tragedy and a confession that even baptized civilization still lives east of Eden.

The medieval imagination took this for granted. History was not progress but decline. Every generation looked backward toward a nobler past and forward to the promised restoration. This is the cosmology Lewis and Tolkien inherited and revived in modern myth. In Narnia, the magic thins, beasts lose their speech, and even the sunlight grows pale as the Last Battle approaches. In Middle-Earth  the elves depart, Númenor is drowned, and the men of the Third Age pale in comparison to their forefathers. For both writers, the age of heroes recedes because man himself has grown smaller. Magic, vigor and wisdom are spread thin like butter on too much bread as the ages roll on. The Fall is not an event confined to Genesis; it is a metaphysical entropy, Tolkien’s long defeat written into time itself.

And yet, beneath this sense of fading runs a defiant hope. The telling of tales itself is a kind of rebellion against forgetfulness, of reaching back toward that first dawn when man stood upright and unashamed. The very act of remembering and speaking names, of crafting heroes, is an echo of the creative Word that first spoke the world into being. To tell such stories is to strain toward wholeness. Even our modern world has stumbled on to a sliver of this truth when it says “we are the stories we tell ourselves”. But it uses that insight to justify reaching again for the apple instead of waiting in humility. We are shaped by what we choose to remember and repeat. Which is why we must take care to tell our stories rightly

Our heroes are imperfect remembrances, but they keep the pattern alive: man as image-bearer, meant for dominion without tyranny, courage without cruelty, and wisdom that serves love. Myth, then, is memory expressed in longing. Every tale of the greater-than-man is an echo older than Babel: that the world was once ruled by one who walked with God, and that somewhere, we still remember his name. Adam.

The True Superman: Adam, Crowned with Glory

If myth remembers fragments of the beginning, the Scriptures testify to the story in full. To understand what our stories reach for, we must return to the beginning, not to the dust, but to the breath that gave it life. 

Adam was created as a man in full strength. He was made good, every faculty of mind, will, and affection rightly ordered toward God. His knowledge had limits, but no error; his strength had bounds, but no decay. He stood whole, body and soul in harmony, lord of the visible world and in communion with the invisible: the spiritual order modern man forgets how to see.

Adam’s relationship with God wasn’t arbitrary. It had a shape defined by the simple reality that God is Creator and Adam is creature. God gave: the garden, the work, the bride and every promise of future blessing. Adam received with gratitude, knowing his life and joy depended on God’s provision. God commanded: tend the garden, be fruitful and multiply, refrain from the one tree. Adam obeyed with trust, confident in God’s timing and goodness. Blessing flowed through the relationship, not around it. 

This is the first covenant, not a contract between equals, but a bond between Creator and creature where both parties have their necessary place. When Adam reached for the fruit, he didn’t just break a rule he broke the relationship. He said, in effect, ‘I will receive blessing on my terms, not Yours’ to the One who alone has the right to define all terms. 

King David declares in Psalm 8 that “You have made [man] a little lower than the angels, And You have crowned him with glory and honor.” And in Adam it was no metaphor. Adam bore real glory: the reflected radiance of the God whose image he carried. He was the first and greatest king, the archetype of dominion. His governance was order without tyranny. His work was worship. He labored in harmony with nature, neither in idle leisure nor in weary toil but in fruitful stewardship unopposed by thorn or blight. The garden was his home and his ministry, not a test to be overcome or temptation to endure, but a place where obedience and joy were united in one act.

The glory he reflected was not his own but that of a perfect Creator. If we were to look upon Adam as he first stood, we would see, in human form, what we have become only in parody. Our virtues would seem corruption, our strength naught but fragility. As orcs are to men, so fallen men must be to him, recognizable, but twisted objects of pity and revulsion.

C. S. Lewis understood this weight in Perelandra, when Ransom first beholds the unfallen man of Venus. There is no vanity, no artifice in him, only unselfconscious majesty. He moves with the ease of one whose will and reason are friends. His presence is unnerving not because it threatens, but because it reveals. Lewis, like medieval theologians and poets before him, recognized that holiness is not fragility but density: a moral gravity so real that sin cannot approach without distortion.

Tolkien glimpsed the same truth in the quiet joy of Tom Bombadil. “He is the Master,” says Goldberry, not a tyrant, but one who belongs so wholly to his place that nothing can master him. Bombadil’s power is not domination but indifference to possession. He rules by delight. Evil passes over him like shadow over stone, finding nothing to cling to. He is, in his strange way, a parable of the unfallen Adam: master not because he seizes, but because he serves perfectly the One who made him.

Both Lewis and Tolkien understood that such wholeness could not last in our world. Their glimpses of unfallen man sharpen the contrast with what we have become. The Fall shattered this harmony. The light that once crowned Adam dimmed, and the image of God in man became fractured glass, still capable of reflection, but now tarnished and incomplete. Yet the remnants remain. Every artist who longs to make, every scientist who seeks to know, every parent who names and nurtures, all are echoes still of the vocation Adam fulfilled perfectly and we fulfill imperfectly. Even our rebellion, in its twisted way, proves our design: we still reach upward because once we were ourselves upright.

This is the tragedy and wonder of our race. We remember glory without being able to bear it. We dream of perfection, but when confronted by even its faintest suggestion, we turn away. Were we to stand again before unfallen Adam, his very presence would unmake our illusions. We would see that our striving, our civilization, our morality, even our noblest imagination, are all thin copies of what he was in truth.

Yet to remember him rightly is not despair but hope. For the Second Adam has already walked among us, not crowned with perfect body or glory, but with thorns. His glory was veiled in humility, His dominion exercised in obedience, His perfection made complete through suffering. In Him, the image is restored not by might, but by mercy.

Adam, the true Superman, still stands at the root of our memory; Christ, the greater Adam, stands at its restoration. Between the two lies every story we tell about what it means to be human.

False Supermen: Nietzsche and the Rebellion of Self

If Adam was crowned with glory through obedience, the fallen world crowns itself through defiance. Every age replays the scene in the garden: the fruit, the whisper, the promise unchanged. “You shall be as God, knowing good from evil.” What began as a single act of distrust has expanded into the governing philosophy of man.

The serpent’s lie was not crude idolatry or naked offer of wealth, pleasure, or power: it was the offer of self-determination. The suggestion that Adam could be his own measure, law, savior. This is no less evil or any less of a rebellion against the created order. Adam was and we are created by a perfectly Just and Good God eternal, with standards we cannot escape. Modernity has only refined the vocabulary. We no longer speak of gods and angels, but of autonomy, authenticity, self-actualization. We preach that meaning is created instead of received. 

Friedrich Nietzsche saw that enlightenment philosophy in its pursuit of reason, science and individualism had stripped the modern world of reliance on God. But instead of correctly diagnosing that this was a rebellious attempt at murder he presumes it was successful. God is dead. Something must replace him. Nietzsche’s Übermensch, the Overman, (or Superman) is the man who believes the lie that God is dead and fully realizes the implications: that there is no greater standard and he himself must transcend morality, create values from nothing, will his own purpose into existence. He is honest, but heir of the serpent’s promise “you will be as gods”, perfected into philosophy. Nietzsche saw clearly what many of his disciples do not: that if God is dead, man must replace Him, or else collapse into meaninglessness. The Overman is the apotheosis of humanism: man enthroned upon the ruins of heaven. Superman looking to Adam in his weakest moment—choosing to will himself instead of remembering his strength fully realized from God before his fall.

But what Nietzsche called necessary liberation from “slave morality” is, in truth, the final form of slavery. An empty throne in heaven does not free man but chains him to himself. The will to power, unanchored from goodness, becomes self-consuming. Without an objective order to receive or serve, man must manufacture one and in doing so he devours himself. The Overman cannot rest because he must endlessly justify his own existence. His strength becomes performance, his virtue self-assertion. He is Adam re-enacting the Fall in reverse: casting God out of the garden and naming himself as if he can thus create a new apple to take and eat.

Dostoevsky saw the same abyss decades earlier. In Crime and Punishment, the young student Raskolnikov persuades himself that greatness justifies transgression. He murders not out of hatred but out of theory: to test whether he is a “Napoleon,” a man entitled by intellect and education to stand beyond conventional morality. What he discovers instead is rot. The act divides his soul; he becomes what his name signified: raskol, schism, a man divided against himself.

Dostoevsky understood what Nietzsche would later exalt: that once man claims the divine prerogative of defining good and evil, he loses not only innocence but sanity. Raskolnikov’s torment is not merely guilt, it is metaphysical disintegration. He has tried to be his own god and finds that his creation is monstrous. Instead of making himself a Napoleon with palaces and armies he has remade himself into a blood-stained crime scene down to his very heart. His sickness is the sickness of the modern spirit: moral fever born of self-deification.

The Overman, in whatever age he appears, is always the anti-Adam. Where Adam’s glory was received, the Overman’s is seized. Where Adam’s dominion served the Creator, the Overman’s power serves only the self. He is the shadow that fallen man casts when he tries to reclaim the image of God without God. 

This is why it matters who our supermen serve. Every vision of strength implies a master. Power without reference to the good becomes tyranny; will unbound from obedience becomes chaos. Our myths betray our theology: when our heroes serve no one higher, they become demons dressed as men.

The rebellion of self is not freedom. The serpent’s promise was never progress: knowledge without wisdom, strength without love, godhood without God. It remains the same old apple, polished by modern hands, offered in new words but with the same result. 

We live in Nietzsche’s world now, whether we’ve read him or not. Every time someone says ‘you create your own meaning’ or ‘live your truth,’ they’re echoing the Overman. And every time that rings hollow, as eventually it will, we’re discovering what Raskolnikov discovered: we were not made for self-creation. We were made to receive and transmit meaning, not to manufacture it.

Man of Steel: Look Up—Superman and the Memory of Adam

When I was a child, I thought like a child and among those thoughts was that Superman was simple and boring. He seemed generic and overpowered, saddled with artificial weaknesses just to give him something to struggle against. But as with many things in my life, there came a point when I became a man and decided to give Superman a fair chance and sought out the stories fans praised as his best. And I found that he was more than the mere baggage I carried from the conversation around him. I saw strength joined with goodness, aspiration printed with mythic overtones, and a reverence for the truth and beauty we used to call “the American way.” Superman, especially in his truest form, is not an alien god pretending to be a man, but man as he was meant to be. In him we hear a call to be better, the echo of Adam: crowned creatures who receive power as a gift and rule in humble service. Through Superman’s many retellings, we can trace our culture’s fading memory of man’s true nature–how we have reinterpreted goodness, power, and even purpose itself.

From his earliest appearances, Superman is not a story about gaining power but about what to do with power that is gifted. His power doesn’t come from training, but from the simple fact of what he is, a Kryptonian bathed by a yellow sun. The appeal of his origin is not just the science-fiction drama of a dying world, lost perfect home, or last-minute sacrificial rescue. The heart of the story is that, like all boys, he learns he has power as he grows and discovers that there is evil in this world his strength could address. His power is not what makes him good; it is the moral foundation he receives from his adopted family: restraint, mercy, and refusal to lord his strength over others. His greatness is moral before it is physical. Like the unfallen Adam, he is lord of the earth not through domination but through care exercised with power and ruled by love.

Where Nietzsche’s Overman casts off the moral law, Superman embodies it. He bends his knees to do good even when it costs him, understanding that he is not worth more than those he rescues, even if he has a greater capacity to act. He is no pagan god (aloof, capricious, demanding) but a man who remembers what dominion was meant to be: righteous and protective toward the order of creation. In Superman we glimpse what man was before he grasped at the fruit.

Superman is often mistaken for Christ, and the comparison is tempting but misplaced. He is not the incarnate Word made flesh. Not a God. Rather, he is a picture of humanity restored, and a reflection of the Second Adam precisely because he resembles the first.

When Paul writes that Christ “made Himself nothing…taking on the form of a servant,” he reveals not only the nature of redemption but the pattern of true humanity. Superman, in his nobler portrayals, walks that pattern. He cloaks his strength, chooses humility, and bears the burdens of others. He restrains his power not because he fears it, but because he understands that might exists for mercy. His virtue comes not from Krypton, his lost birthworld, but from Smallville, the Kents and the home of his adoption. 

Yet even these imitations still hint at something real: the shape of redemption has always been humility before exaltation. Superman reflects Christ imperfectly because he reflects Adam more deeply. The aspirational man who truly was.

The Golden Age

In the early comics, Superman was not cosmic but local: a Depression-era defender of the powerless. He stopped evictions, confronted corrupt politicians, and used his strength to defend those who had no advocate. Here the echo of Adam is present: dominion expressed as justice, strength turned outward to tend rather than inward in self-assertion. The world he occupies is rough and fallen, and his methods can be blunt, but his moral clarity is unmistakable. The immigrant narrative takes center stage. Not Christ fleeing to Egypt but a man using the gifts he’s been given for good. Not a god descending to earth. Aspirational, powerful and very much a man.

Superman: For All Seasons

Later stories deepened the myth. My first serious encounter with Superman’s moral heart was Superman: For All Seasons where Jeph Loeb and Tim Sale portray him as a genuine son of the American heartland: strong but unsure, gentle because he was raised in love, cautious because he knows strength can wound as easily as it protects. The story unfolds through the eyes of those who know him best, tracing Clark’s growth as he learns what his strength means and what it costs.

In Smallville he wrestles with the limits of his power after a tornado. In Metropolis he faces his first real challenges in a disaster engineered by Lex Luthor and the loneliness of a life divided between identities. When crisis draws him home again, he must discover whether power can actually serve without overwhelming. 

The book asks whether Superman still has a place in this more complicated world and it answers the question with a thoughtfully considered ‘yes’: Superman has a place in all seasons, both yesterday, today, and tomorrow. But the very fact that such a question needs asking reveals a cultural anxiety about goodness itself. This is Adam after the fall, still faithful, still remembering Eden’s light even in exile. He bears strength and challenges of the fallen world with melancholy grace.

All-Star Superman

All-Star Superman evokes ancient heroes, giving us a Superman near-divine and luminous in the mold of a classical demigod. Grant Morrison and Frank Quitely’s All-Star Superman opens with our hero already dying. Overexposure to the sun, his source of strength, has begun to unravel him. Yet rather than rage against mortality, Superman accepts this as vocation. In the twelve labors that follow, deliberately echoing Hercules, he works to heal and restore. He rescues a suicidal girl from a ledge, forgives Luthor, and entrusts his legacy to a world that must learn to hope without him.

In every act, Superman reflects not omnipotence but obedience. He knows his time is short and uses it to heal. Like the true Adam, he orders creation by serving it. His strength is not a weapon to force the gates of heaven or expiate blood-guilt like Hercules but a vessel for service. His quest to spend his death as meaningfully as he spent his life. Morrison’s Superman glows not with self-made light but reflected radiance, an image of man restored to purpose. In the final panels he ascends into the sun to sustain it becoming an eternal reminder of divine light shining upon the world in mercy and provision. 

Superman for All Seasons asked us if Superman still has a place. All-Star Superman answers a harder question: whether he can remain meaningful in a world convinced that its gods, and ideals, are dying.

Kingdom Come

Mark Waid and Alex Ross’s Kingdom Come depicts the twilight of gods and men, the end of an age and the coming of the next. A world drowning in chaos as new, reckless metahumans turn ‘justice’ into spectacle. Superman, disillusioned after the death of Lois and the world’s embrace of Magog–a brutal ‘hero’ who kills the Joker and is celebrated for it–withdraws from the world that rejects him. When he returns, it is not as a violent conqueror but as a spurned King who feels he must restore order to chaos in his domain. He enforces peace and constructs a gulag for the wayward heroes, but even that act of order is tainted by pride. Disaster follows, his prison explodes and Superman must choose between punishing humanity for rejecting him or bearing their fear as his own burden. He finally understands: the crown means nothing if those you rule will not follow freely. In the end, standing amid the ashes, he realizes that law without grace is tyranny.

Kingdom Come’s Superman embodies the tension between righteous dominion and fallen wrath. He is a man haunted by memory: his ideals remain pure, but his methods have grown brittle under strain. In the final pages, he lays down his mantle and begins again among mortals, planting seeds in the ruins. It is an image of repentance, of dominion restored through humility. The king returns not to rule, but to serve. Kingdom Come asks us to imagine if any man has the strength to hold the throne and answers with classical presbyterian clarity that no man, even the strongest, smartest and most moral can rule over others without corrupting himself.

Across these retellings, we see a pattern: Superman begins as man remembering Eden, matures into man embodying redemption, and ends as man learning to bow to a reality that rules even over him. His strength becomes grace, his rule becomes stewardship, and his glory becomes a beacon. Each stage draws us closer to the true Adamic image, a man crowned to tend to all creation and serve. 

But modern reinterpretations drift from this memory. The further our culture moves from Adam (and from the God who crowned him) the more our heroes lose the grace that once governed their strength.

Snyder’s Superman: An Inversion of Incarnation

The DCEU movies give us a different kind of Superman, one who wears Christ’s imagery but enters Nietzsche’s world. Zack Snyder clearly means to point us toward nobility. His Superman is a fundamentally decent man dropped into an ignoble age, a godlike stranger enduring suspicion and hatred for the sake of a world that does not deserve him. And yet the way the films are framed reverses the pattern of both Adam and Christ. 

In Man of Steel, General Zod provides us with an antitype, an opposite for Superman to (all too literally) grapple with. Zod is pure vocation without love: “I exist only to protect Krypton.” His devotion to his people is absolute, but his dominion is tribal and destructive to creation. He would terraform the earth, erase humanity, and twist creation into a new Krypton if that is what his mission demands. Adam’s dominion was meant for the whole earth under God; Zod’s rulership will mutilate the earth to preserve his own.

Clark’s central choice is cast as a conflict between blood and adoption: Will he stand with his Kryptonian destiny or his human upbringing? He ultimately kills Zod to save humanity, choosing Earth over Krypton, but the film never names this as obedience to a higher law. It plays less like submission to a Creator and more like an individual conscience drawing a line in a godless cosmos. Zod is the Overman who will reshape the world for his people alone; Kal-El is the Overman who chooses a different people but both still move in a universe where no one above them has a moral voice.

Batman v Superman pushes this tension further. Bruce Wayne’s paranoia that an unaccountable god must be destroyed before he turns is exactly how a Nietzschean world reacts to the Overman. “If there’s even a 1% chance he’s our enemy, we have to take it as an absolute certainty.” Superman, meanwhile, drifts in uncertainty. He broods over whether humanity deserves his help, whether his interventions do more harm than good, but never speaks with the clarity of a man who knows his place under a higher King. The film is haunted by religious language, but it cannot say who, if anyone, is Lord.

Even the famous “Martha” moment, meant in concept to humanize both men highlights the potential squandered by this frame. It does not summon Bruce to recognize a shared vocation under God so much as shock him with the fact that his enemy has a mother too. Empathy defuses paranoia, but empathy alone cannot establish justice. Without a shared understanding of what power is for, without recognizing that both men should be servants of a higher good, their alliance remains pragmatic rather than covenantal.

The inversion becomes clearest in Justice League (in both Whedon’s theatrical cut and Snyder’s own.) In both versions, the League literally digs up Superman’s corpse and uses alien technology to resurrect him. Resurrection is an act engineered from below, not divine providence or self-authenticating miracle. The result is not peace but rage. The risen Superman is disoriented and violent, attacking his would-be allies until Lois Lane appears and his fury subsides.

The image is strikingly reversed from the gospel. In Scripture, the risen Christ calms His disciples, speaks peace, and commissions them. In Justice League, the disciples must calm their resurrected god, and his orientation is not to a received mission but to the woman he loves. It is human affection, not eternal vocation, that leashes divine power. Later, in the final battle, the League mostly buys time until Superman arrives to end the conflict in a handful of blows. The shape is not shared stewardship under a Second Adam, but the arrival of the Overman whose sheer strength makes the contributions of others irrelevant.

Snyder’s Superman is therefore not simply “dark” or “gritty.” He is a Christ-shaped silhouette filled with Nietzsche’s questions. He suffers, dies, and rises, but not as the incarnate Son who descends in love and returns in glory. Instead, he is an alien god trying to decide whether humanity is worth the burden of saving, and a resurrected weapon whose power must be managed by those who fear him. The world around him remembers that a god should die and rise; it has forgotten what kind of God would do so and why.

James Gunn’s Superman: Kingdom Undone

James Gunn’s Superman (2025) promises a hopeful return to sincerity, but what it delivers is something subtler and sadder: a hero ruled by feeling rather than form. This is not the “man without chest” Lewis feared, a cold rationalist who dismantles value in the name of efficiency, but the inverse: a man of ungoverned heart, whose compassion, though real, is unmoored from wisdom. Gunn’s Superman is all sympathy and no spine. Not an unfeeling god, but an over-feeling man. In the language of Genesis, he is Adam shorn of dominion, still tender toward creation but no longer capable of ruling it.

The film is filled with small mercies, saving a dog, apologizing to civilians, checking on bystanders, even pausing to protect a squirrel amid the chaos of a kaiju battle, but each act, while sincere, reveals his paralysis of leadership. His empathy prevents mastery. He cannot bring order but he can bring comfort. He stands amid chaos like a father who has forgotten how to say “no”, offering apologies where clarity, judgement and strength are needed.

Gunn’s Superman feels deeply, yet his feelings carry no moral hierarchy. When Lois baits him in an interview about collateral damage, he responds with wounded pride boasting of his “no-casualty” record like a public-relations officer, not a moral agent. The audience is meant to see his humility, but it reads as insecurity: he longs to be liked more than to be right. Later, he frets over insults trending on social media “Supershit” as though public perception, not conscience, were the measure of his worth. This is the tragedy of Gunn’s vision: virtue becomes self-image.

Even his heroism feels reactive. In the Boravian conflict, he intervenes impulsively, making foreign policy decisions without considering consequences. His strength expresses compassion but not command. When the Justice Gang fights the kaiju despite his pleas for restraint and the effort he put into making sure there are no casualties, Superman can only tell the Gang  “it has really thick skin,” an observation rather than an act of leadership. His authority dissolves into commentary as his more active allies take this observation and leverage it into a final solution as Superman walks bemused and inactive and can only muster a plaintive rebuke at the monster’s demise.

The film’s moral center seems to come from Jor-El’s holographic admonition: “Rule without mercy.” Clark rejects it, rightly, yet in doing so, he abandons rulership entirely. His father’s tyranny and his own sentimentality become two halves of the same broken coin: command without mercy versus mercy without command. Both are distortions of Adamic dominion, where purpose and goodness once walked hand in hand.

By the final act, Gunn’s Superman seems content to “be human”, “to make the best choices I can,” as he says, “that’s my greatest strength.” But this creed of adequacy, presented as wisdom, is a confession of impotence. The film affirms his authenticity: “You trust everyone… maybe that’s the real punk rock” as if trust itself were salvific. It’s sincerity elevated to soteriology. The Superman who once taught us what man could be now assures us that who we already are is enough.

There are moments that hint at grandeur, Superman floating out the window to turn himself in to protect a frightened dog, or the pocket-dimension escape sequence, but even these are acts of sensitivity, not sovereignty. They show a Superman who kneels before creation but cannot name it. His kindness redeems nothing; it merely reassures. Gunn gives us a hero who loves without leading and saves without sanctifying. 

In this way, Gunn’s Superman completes the descent mapped by the characters earlier incarnations..

Golden Age Superman acted for justice.
Morrison’s Superman died in service.
Snyder’s Superman suffered for meaning.
Gunn’s Superman reaches for approval.

Each step down the ladder is a dimming of the Adamic image from crowned to compassionate. What began as the echo of man made to rule ends as a man made to please.

This version of Superman offers not rebellion (as Nietzsche’s Overman did), but resignation, a world that no longer believes in the possibility of dominion rightly ordered. He doesn’t embody the serpent’s “You shall be as gods,” but the postmodern “I’m only human.” Yet both are forms of forgetting: one defies the Creator; the other denies His image.

Gunn’s Superman, for all his sincerity, is the tarnished mirror of Adam’s tenderness without his glory, a man good enough to save dogs but too small to save the world.

Why Superman Matters

Across ninety years of storytelling, Superman has traced the moral biography of Western man. In his earliest days, he was Adam remembered as noble, humble, and whole. Later as the soul of the nation became unsettled he became Adam in exile yearning at the edge of a garden to which he could never return. Then he became Adam forgetting, straining to fit an America that is no longer “moral and religious,” reshaped to accommodate a culture that doubts its own history.

Superman’s evolution reveals our own. As our confidence in transcendence wanes, so too does our ability to imagine goodness that demands reverence or responsibility we do not choose. Yet his story still draws us, because we cannot quite forget what he represents. Within every new retelling the same yearning echoes: the memory of man as he was meant to be. Dominion without tyranny. Wise rule and gentle tending. Service to a higher power in humility. We were never meant to become gods but we were meant to be super-men: creatures crowned with glory, bearing power as a gift in the presence of the One who gave it.

Conclusion: The Word and Work

In the end, our stories reveal our doctrine of man. They cannot help it. Every myth carries an anthropology. Every hero presumes a moral hierarchy. Every imagined superman answers, in his own way, the oldest question: what is man for?

When Superman is written steady, obedient to the good, and strong without cruelty, we are remembering Adam as he was meant to be. When he gives himself for others, bearing burdens that are not his, he reminds us of the Second Adam, the one who restores the image we broke.

And when he is reduced to sentiment, spectacle, or self-assertion, he mirrors our own confusion about what humanity is for.

Superman endures because he keeps the question alive. He stands at the crossroads between our memory and our forgetting. In him we recognize the shape of goodness we still long for: dominion without tyranny, strength that protects, humility that dignifies. Even in his diminished forms, we sense the outline of something older, something we were made to reflect.

Our age, unable to name the source of that longing, either inflates him into a god or shrinks him into a symbol of sincerity. But the truth remains unchanged: heroes are confessions.

They reveal whom we believe ourselves to be and whom we believe we ought to become.

This is why stories matter. Not because they let us escape the world, but because they train us to see it. They tilt the soul toward pride or toward grace, molding us into false supermen or leading us to hunger for the true Man who restores us. And if stories shape souls, then the choice of which stories we tell (and which we refuse) becomes a matter of eternal consequence.

So the task is simple, though never easy: to  tell better stories. To honor strength that kneels, rule that serves, and glory that blesses. To prefer heroes who remember what man was created to be over those who pretend we can redefine it.

Our dust will rise again.

And when it does, each of us will stand upright, crowned once more with glory or bow our heads uncrowned forever.

Inheritance Squandered: The Parable of Prodigal Storytellers

When touchstone cultural stories are damaged by poor sequels, reboots, or postmodern ideological ‘updates for the modern age’ the inevitable defense comes against any attempted critique: “you can’t hurt the original. It will always exist.” At face value, this is true. The Lord of the Rings still sits on the shelf, untouched by Amazon’s Rings of Power. George Lucas’s original Star Wars trilogy still plays: admittedly only in an editorial tainted “Special Edition” form. These texts persist. 

But this line of reasoning is incomplete, because stories do not live only as static artifacts. They live in continuity: they contain memory of the past, layers of meaning, and speak to the recipient of something particular. In short they are foundationally vehicles of communication and an inheritance from one mind to another. 

What Follows Matters

The damage warded against by criticism of successor works isn’t to the original as it was received: it’s to the whole as it is passed to the future. There’s a crucial difference between a story that is complete and self-contained and one that is ongoing. If a story is part of a larger continuity (especially one that claims to resolve, reinterpret, or explain earlier parts) then what comes after can retroactively alter how the story is understood. Let’s take a look at some examples to explore just how continued storytelling can not just impact but lessen the story that came before.

Case 1: Star Wars: A Long Time Ago In A Myth (Now) Far Far Away

The original trilogy created a mythic structure of rebellion, redemption, and renewal. The prequels added depth and history (however flawed), which both undermined some parts of the story and strengthened others. But the sequels, particularly The Last Jedi and The Rise of Skywalker, attempted to deconstruct the saga.

Their effect? They retroactively reframed the meaning of Luke’s heroism, the victory over Palpatine, and the balance of the Force. What was once the culmination of sacrifice became a temporary reprieve before reset. Who were once heroes became uncommendable, even worthy of despite. All the momentum was lost and every victory undone: instead of progress we were given regress to set up new heroes with nothing to conserve and only excellence to supplant.

What was the original story about? If the answer changes, so does the story.

Endings matter. They give meaning to the beginning and middle. If you change the end, you change the interpretation of everything that came before. You can criticize the first chapter of a book or the first book of a trilogy, but you cannot commend it as a whole until the last chapter closes: because the conclusion can by itself reframe, redeem, or revile what came before. That’s what makes the Return of the Jedi so powerful, it redeems the history of Darth Vader and lifts Luke up as a paragon of forgiveness and finding humanity even in the darkest part of power and ambition. 

Case 2: Game of Thrones When The End Betrays the Audience

The quintessential modern example of how an ending can redefine what came before is A Song of Ice and Fire. George R.R. Martin’s series was always morally muddy, often shockingly vile, and deeply uncomfortable. I never was able to recommend it easily. And yet I told people: this is a world of dark grays and blacks, where the rare glimpses of white shines all the brighter. Amid the cynicism and cruelty, there were flickers of loyalty, of honor, of sacrificial love that spoke to something more. The story seemed poised to say: even here, in the worst of worlds, light can break through.

Martin’s unfinished books leave that tension unresolved. The ending still unwritten: the balance not settled. There is still space for spring to come again, in truth as well as season: for meaning to emerge from brutality. The questions of destiny, justice, memory, and hope are still alive.

But the HBO series answered those questions—probably in the same way Martin was working toward and in doing so, it defined the shape of the story for the public imagination. Whatever Martin may still write: the door has been closed for most readers and viewers. The dominant interpretation is one of fatalistic nihilism. Winter came. Men died. Evil was overcome by chance. And we continue from there with what the Maesters say is “the best story.”

But it’s not the best story. This is a metanarrative lie rationalizing the unrealistic ending in realpolitik terms to bear the ascension of the Fisher King without recognizing the weight and forward looking promise that entails. 

The glimmers of beauty, sacrifice, and transcendence were crushed under narrative expedience, tonal whiplash, and a final message that seemed to say: power corrupts all, hope is naïve, and history forgets. Ned was a fool and there is no redemption for sins.

Whether fans accept it or not, that ending now frames every reread and every rewatch. The show’s conclusion retroactively bleeds into the novels, casting light on shadows maybe Martin did place. But it extinguishes the idea that there might be true heroes, true sacrifices, or even true arcs of progress. Instead, it offers the anti-myth: every man either dies or lives long enough to become the villain. Aragorn may be a fine ranger, but he would have made a terrible king.

And that’s the real betrayal: not just of narrative, but of moral imagination. A Song of Ice and Fire hinted at truth, twisted and obscured, yes, but still present. The show’s ending replaced those echoes of truth and beauty with a fundamental lie: that there is no meaning, only motion. That love cannot overcome power. That the long winter is inevitably coming.

In doing so, it darkened not only its own fictional world, but also the mythic tradition it drew from and even the real world it was speaking to.

Case 3: His Dark Materials The War on Heaven

When I first read The Golden Compass in my youth, I fell into a carefully laid trap. I was enchanted by Philip Pullman’s imaginative world of armored bears, shimmering portals, and daemons that seemed like innocuous Platonic manifestations. The tone was mysterious, magical, and clever. I sensed hints of trouble in paradise: an unambiguously wrong Church, consorting with daemons, and a planned war against heaven but I assumed these were points of conflict or at least ambiguous. After all, Lyra’s father was cold and unloving, his ambition to raise an army against Heaven grotesque. Surely the story would steer toward redemption, not rebellion. Lyra: our window into the story didn’t seem aligned with the Church or her father’s goals.

As I read The Subtle Knife, my wonder deepened. Here was a modern story in the legacy of The Chronicles of Narnia: intelligent, symbolically rich, philosophically playful. It felt like a grown-up version of a childhood wonder-story struggling with loss, ambiguity, and depth. I was still under the spell.

And then I read The Amber Spyglass.

That was the moment the veil lifted. The trilogy was not just an adventure playing with theological themes: it was a polemic. Not a mere critique of clerical corruption or religious hypocrisy but an open rebellion against God as God. The war against Heaven was not a mistake, not a tragedy, not a desperate error—it was supposed to be good. Pullman’s god is portrayed as decrepit, false, and dying. The liberation of the universe requires His death not self-sacrificially on a cross, but in the midst of battle, whimpering and moaning under His own impotent weight as He is betrayed and mockingly reviled.

Once that becomes clear, the earlier books can’t help but be recontextualized entirely. The beauty of Pullman’s world becomes sinister as it always was. The wonder becomes weaponized. Paradise is not merely lost but is intentionally destroyed. The reader is asked to cheer as it burns.

There is no walking back from that precipice. Once you see the bones beneath the skin, the spell breaks. Was I blind not to notice the intention of the story from the start? Probably. It wasn’t entirely hiding the ball, but it was playfully ambiguous. It wanted me to participate innocently in its rebellion. The Amber Spyglass didn’t merely end the story. It revealed it. And what it revealed was not the triumph of truth or the vindication of conscience. It was the celebration of rebellion. Of autonomy unbound by love, ungoverned by law. And that’s the point.

The Conclusion Mattered

It redefined everything that came before. What seemed like a modern myth was, in the end, a lie. Not the fulfillment of Narnian longing, but its deliberate inversion. The glimpses of wonder were not breadcrumbs toward transcendence, but siren songs luring the reader into cosmic treason.

Pullman’s world, like his Authority, pretended toward divinity but in the end, both collapsed into dust. Every story, in the end, points toward something: toward what it believes is worthy of love, of reverence, of imitation. In that sense, every story worships something.

And this one worships nothing and invites you to worship it too.

Case 4: Wheel of Time Myth Shepherded Through Flawed Stewardship

The Wheel of Time here is a useful example not of betrayal, but of the precarious balance required to preserve a story’s mythic and moral coherence. Robert Jordan constructed an epic that drew deliberately on the cycles of real-world myth and history, reworking religious archetypes and moral systems into a fantasy framework. At its best, it wasn’t just imitating myth: it was engaging it forwards and backward, both prefiguring and expressing our myths in its history and present but also mythologizing present and past real-world history that had not yet faded into its own myth. I describe it as a flawed masterpiece with little to compare with its breadth of ambition. Tragically Robert Jordan was unable to complete the weave he started and his death left the story unresolved. Pregnant with intention and promised resolution. The story could go many different ways; like A Song of Ice and Fire it could aim for subversion. Like His Dark Materials it could demolish the very foundations of myth that it stood upon for any meaning at all. But it was incomplete: the answer was withheld.

In what can only be described as a miracle of publishing providence Brandon Sanderson was tasked with a nearly impossible job: finish the sprawling, incomplete epic with thousands of character threads and mythological undertones not his own. Even more miraculous the conclusion actually worked, but it was tenuous. He executed much of it well, particularly the mechanical elements like plot and action pacing but struggled with certain characters, tonal fidelity and thematic subtlety (not that Jordan was himself always a master of subtlety).

Nowhere is this more evident than in his treatment of Mat Cauthon. Jordan’s Mat was a roguish trickster-hero shaped by mythic archetypes: half Cú Chulainn, half Loki with a side of his own brand of reluctant hero and the clearest connection to past through the memories he has of his own past lives. He was a deeply layered symbol of fate, irony, and unwanted destiny. Sanderson’s Mat veered too far into comic relief and quippy detachment, forgetting the character behind the trappings and flattening his arc into something more mundane than mythic. Other characters suffered similar drift.

Most crucially, Sanderson did not fully engage with the series’ central conceit: that the Wheel is not just cyclical time, but a mythological and philosophical structure echoing the myths and histories of our own world while pointing beyond them. The books are not merely escapist, they are revelatory myth, and that vision was never fully embraced in the final volumes.

By the end of the series, Rand al’Thor is less a man and more a myth incarnate. His final arc of sacrifice without death, rejection of power, and post-victory anonymity draw directly from Christological motifs. He dies without dying, defeats the Dark One not by destruction but by rejection of domination, and leaves the world to live as a quiet redeemer.

This was not Sanderson’s invention. The image of Rand coming in full manifestation of embraced Ta’veren glory: the fields blooming behind him is Jordan’s, pulled almost directly from his notes. It shines with a shard of truth, perhaps even what Lewis called the “good dreams” of paganism: human stories unconsciously grasping at divine reality and it, even wrapped in the more mundane mechanical trappings of merely ending the story, make the whole work complete and more importantly significant.

In one sense, the humanism of the ending, the idea that the Creator does not descend or even communicate with his creations, that the Dark One is not slain but bound again by choice awaiting another release, and that peace must be stewarded by mortals is not a betrayal, but a culmination. The story affirms human responsibility, yes, but through a sacrificial, transcendent figure who images divine hope and the underlying structure of the myth promises that this is not the true ending. The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and pass: look to dawn, on the third day: I am coming. 

So what happened? The final scenes, especially Rand’s, work on a symbolic and theological level further even than Jordan’s intent. But the tone, character arcs, and mythic underpinnings were often handled inconsistently (not that Jordan wasn’t himself prone to such wanderings). The danger in this case wasn’t subversion or sabotage but dilution.

And that brings us back to the argument: Endings matter because they tell us what the story meant. Even when drawn directly from the author’s notes, a story can still be weakened if its voice or vision is not fully understood by the one concluding it. It can drift. Even in the hands of it’s first maker.

The Wheel of Time ending doesn’t destroy the series. But it does illustrate how fragile a story’s wholeness is when its final meaning depends on faithful stewardship not just of facts and events, but of myth, tone, and truth.

Case 5: Star Trek To Boldly Undo What Man Has Done Before

Does that mean that continuity and storytelling cannot bear internal contrast? Can a story not develop through different eras of reflection, evolving in how it is expressed and imagined?

Star Trek began as a vision of hope. Gene Roddenberry’s original series was boldly optimistic not just in aesthetics or technology, but in moral imagination. It portrayed a future in which humanity had overcome its tribalism, greed, and brutality not by erasing individuality, but by elevating it. The United Federation of Planets was more than just a setting; it was a symbol of what might be possible if humans chose wisdom, cooperation, and exploration over conquest and fear.

The Next Generation deepened that vision. Under Captain Picard, Starfleet became a vessel not merely for adventure, but for diplomacy, restraint, and principle. Moral dilemmas were faced not with force, but with philosophical reflection. The show portrayed a civilization confident in its ideals yet constantly testing them. It wasn’t utopian because it had arrived at perfection it was utopian because it was always reaching for it.

Then came Deep Space Nine, which dared to complicate that vision. It introduced darkness: corruption, war, religious strife. But it used these trials as abrasion to sand out the rough edges of the Federation’s ideals, and by extension, our own. The Federation was tested, even to the point of breaking, but the essential question remained: how do we live by our ideals when they cost us something? Deep Space Nine asked whether utopia could survive contact with reality and answered yes, but only if it was defended both physically and intellectually, even in the face of violence, imperfection, and competing moral visions.

Voyager returned to the episodic, exploratory format of the original series but often without the same philosophical weight. Its emphasis on progressive representation was handled with a heavy hand resulting in moments of near-comical idealism. The integration of Maquis rebels and Starfleet officers, for example, resolved itself with implausible ease. Deep ideological tensions were subordinated to episodic harmony, and characters who should have resisted assimilation quietly donned Starfleet uniforms without protest.

Enterprise, by contrast, aimed to lay the groundwork for the Federation itself. It sought to explore the raw, unformed values that would one day shape Starfleet. But in doing so, it too often wandered into convoluted territory.

Both shows were bogged down at times by time-travel arcs and high-concept cosmology that strained continuity rather than enriching it.

And yet, even at their weakest, they remained tethered to the framework. The Federation still meant something. Starfleet still stood for principle. These shows operated within the moral architecture they inherited even as they occasionally shook its beams.

Then came Discovery and Picard.

These are not merely flawed entries. They are redefinitions alternating the tone, structure, and metaphysics of the whole. Discovery replaced the clarity of Federation ideals with opaque power structures, retcon-heavy timelines, and emotional bombast. Picard, perhaps more tragically, turned its once-principled captain into a man disillusioned with the very system he once embodied. The Federation is recast as cynical and bureaucratically callous. Starfleet, no longer a vessel of reason and aspiration, becomes just another tool of shadowy interests and cultural decay.

These aren’t just “bad shows.” They aren’t even just “dark shows.” They invert the entire meaning of the mythos.

The tragedy of Star Trek’s recent output is not that it tackles hard subjects, Deep Space Nine did that with brilliance, but that it does so from within a world that has abandoned its own moral gravity. There is no center anymore. No Prime Directive that means something. No Federation that reflects the human ideal. What was once aspirational has become self-parody or worse, self-hatred. The light that once illuminated the darkness has been diffused into nothing. We have drifted too far from the star that once shone at the center.

And that’s what matters: when a story’s future redefines its past, it changes what that past meant. You can no longer watch the old shows in innocence. The Federation is no longer the dream. It is the prelude to inevitable corruption. We didn’t live up to the ideal and by implication, we never could. The story has not continued. It has curdled.

Star Trek, like America, perhaps did not need to end. But it needed custodians, not deconstructors. Its slow fall shows that even without malice, a failure to revere what came before is enough to undo everything.

Stories Can Be Broken from the Start

We’ve spent much of this reflection on endings. How a story concludes determines what it meant, what it stood for, and what it leaves behind. But beginnings matter just as much. The foundation a story is built upon defines the emotional and moral logic that will shape the entire connected universe. Change that foundation, and you don’t just alter the details you redefine the meaning of everything that follows.

We see this clearly in Star Wars. I remember clearly before the prequels, the Clone Wars lived in my imagination as a vast, mythic tragedy, an era of fading light, noble sacrifice, and the downfall of great heroes. Anakin Skywalker’s fall felt enormous because its outlines were undefined but weighty, archetypal, tragic. I was only 14 when Attack of the Clones came out  but I still feel the loss of that imagination as what I had invested with mythic intention and grown in my imagination was uprooted and overwritten with what the prequels gave us: a Jedi Order that was bureaucratic, emotionally stunted, and often wrong. The Clone Wars became not a noble catastrophe, but a confused military campaign driven by bad decisions and political negligence. The effect? Luke’s redemption of Vader now feels less like the return of a fallen knight and more like a mercy extended to a man broken by an institution that was never wise to begin with.

That shift didn’t just affect how we see the past, it redefined the future. The foundation was altered, and so the meaning of the whole structure bent with it.But with Star Wars it didn’t quite break there.

And so we come to the crux of it all and turn to the father of fantasy and champion for mythological storytelling himself: we come to Tolkien and reflect upon Middle Earth.

Case 6: The Lord of the Rings: A World Recast in Flawed Mithril

Before confronting the greater failure, we should pause briefly to consider the lesser one. The Hobbit films do not betray Tolkien’s world, they merely strain it. What began as a whimsical children’s tale is inflated into a CGI-laden war epic, burdened with the expectation of echoing The Lord of the Rings. The result is uneven, sometimes inspired, sometimes absurd.

There are good bones here. The story remains partially faithful, arguably even in line with the kind of imaginative retcon Tolkien himself might have attempted had he lived longer: reworking The Hobbit to harmonize more fully with the deeper mythic gravity of The Lord of the Rings. It’s not unthinkable that he would have expanded the backstory of the dwarves, the exile and politics of Erebor, or more carefully traced Gandalf’s absences to his concern over Dol Guldur and the necromancer rising in the South.

There is a vision here of a children’s tale grown up; filled with personal politics, shadow, and world-spanning resonance. And yet the execution buckles under the weight of this expansion. The pacing falters. The tone wobbles and the story, in its attempt to mirror the grandeur of The Lord of the Rings (Rivendell, elven forests, perilous mountains, a final confrontation at a distant peak) ends up feeling like an echo of an echo. Familiar in shape, but less resonant in meaning.

Still, it is not without merit. Martin Freeman gives us an inspired Bilbo fully realized: nervous, honest, and unexpectedly brave. Smaug is rendered with breathtaking menace. The dwarves sing. Beorn laughs a deep and hearty laugh. The world is still there, even if flickering through a modern computer-generated filter that Tolkien would doubtless despise.

It is also, undeniably, a mixed bag. Levitating Legolas, dwarves on battle-pigs, Thranduil astride a war-moose, and other meme-worthy missteps remind us just how far the tone can stray. But for all its indulgence, The Hobbit trilogy does not break the original novel or even the Lord of the Rings films.

It is a flawed adaptation. But the spirit, though smothered, is not extinguished.

Even in its incomplete state, The Rings of Power reveals itself as something other than a flawed adaptation: it is a redefinition. And not a careful one.

To its credit, it contains moments of aesthetic brilliance: sweeping, meticulously crafted sets, luminous cinematography, and a hauntingly beautiful score by Bear McCreary. There is clear love in parts of its making and even deep knowledge of facts and deep lore. But that love and understanding does not extend to the source material’s moral or metaphysical heart.

The tone swings wildly between overwrought solemnity and plastic artificiality. I don’t object to elevated, stylized dialogue; Tolkien himself wrote speeches full of grandeur. Theoden on the Pelennor, Éomer over his sister’s broken body are not “realistic” conversations, but mythic utterances and I can clearly see that they were trying to realize this style on film. But mythic tone demands mythic clarity. It cannot be propped up by lines like “Do you know why a ship floats and a stone cannot? Because the stone sees only downward” or “Sometimes to find the light, we must first touch the darkness” The style is adopted without the skill or soul to sustain it.

But far worse than inconsistent execution is the confusion of purpose. The story they are trying to tell is not worth telling. Not in this way. This is not a reinterpretation of Tolkien for a modern age: it is a replacement of Tolkien’s vision with a different vision entirely. Which would be fine in its own world, but not as an officially sanctioned prequal.

Take the “problem of the orcs.” Tolkien knew it was a moral tension, he gestured at it in letters, but never resolved it, because to answer it falsely would rupture the framework and unravel the whole. If orcs are fully redeemable, then the great wars are unjust. If they are wholly monstrous, then mercy and pity lose their power. So Tolkien left it alone because he couldn’t fully reconcile it.

But The Rings of Power leans firmly into this tension and attempts to split the difference. Orcs are both sympathetic victims who just want a home, and blood-spattered monsters to be killed without remorse. The show wants to evoke horror and provoke compassion but without moral reckoning. It tries to have its cake and eat it too. The result is confusion, not nuance.

The same confusion infects the portrayal of Sauron and Galadriel. The show toys with the idea of a redemptive Sauron (a bold narrative move, if properly rooted in Tolkien’s own framework of fall and repentance) but instead of grounding this in theological depth or tragic dignity, it turns into romantic tension and half-truths. In the heat of the pivotal moment Sauron speaks truth plainly, and Galadriel lies. The scene that should evoke spiritual crisis plays instead like a spurned lovers’ quarrel.

Worse still, the very foundations of the legendarium are recast. Mithril is no longer a poetic symbol of light and endurance; it becomes the product of a silly myth about an elf and a balrog fusing a Silmaril into the earth, and more disastrously, a kind of spiritual battery necessary to stave off elvish decay. Gil-Galad’s fading becomes not a mythic echo of the long defeat, but a plot device justifying the forging of the Rings as a kind of metaphysical medicine. The show insists on explaining the magic, mechanizing the myth and so undoing it.

And what of Númenor? We were promised a slow moral fall from noble purpose to prideful ruin. Instead, we are given shallow political allegory with immigration fears and populist manipulation. Lazy reflections of our own headlines. There is no exploration of the true Númenórean sickness: the longing for immortality and the bitterness of exile from the divine. The island sinks, but the soul was never there to begin with.

This would all be tolerable (infuriating, but tolerable) if it did not strike at the heart of what Tolkien’s world means.

The Rings of Power imagines a Middle-earth governed by dualism and mechanics. The Valar become fallible administrators. Orcs become oppressed workers. Sauron becomes a man. Grace is gone. Providence is absent. Eru is nowhere to be seen.

If the foundations are laid in this story. If this is the Second Age. Then The Lord of the Rings is redefined. The fall of Sauron is no longer the fall of a rebellious angel, but a lover scorned. The forging and gifting of the Rings is no longer a temptation of pride, but a pragmatic workaround for spiritual entropy. Frodo’s pity for Gollum becomes absurd or irrelevant. The eucatastrophe is stripped of its divine resonance and becomes coincidence.

And that is why it matters. The ending is changed by the beginning. The soul of the story is displaced.

Tolkien himself knew the danger. In his abandoned sequel, The New Shadow, he imagined a future Gondor where peace decays into cultic darkness, where the children of the heroes forget their fathers’ sacrifices: refusing their inheritance and evil returns not in glory, but in banality. He wrote a few pages. And then he stopped. “It was not worth doing,” he said. He understood that the wrong continuation could unravel the meaning of what came before. He had already brought the world to its eucatastrophic end. Tolkien wasn’t just the maker of a world. He was its custodian.

When a Story Is Never Allowed to End, It Cannot Mean

This is the crisis of our cultural age: the story is never allowed to end. And when the story cannot end, it cannot mean. Every time we reopen a finished arc or resurrect a villain, rewrite a motive or shift a moral we risk not only contradiction, but dissolution. Meaning becomes mutable. Myth becomes mere content. The continuity stretches, and stretches, until it breaks “not with a bang, but with a whimper.”

The cost is not just narrative coherence. It is moral weight. When victory is temporary, sacrifice is performative. When evil is misunderstood, good becomes suspect. When myth is reduced to mechanism, all wonder is lost. 

We should care because stories matter not as isolated entertainments, but as living wholes and as conduits of truth from one mind to another.

We should care because endings shape meaning. Because beginnings set the moral terms for what a story can become. Because inheritance is a gift, and a story handed down must be received with reverence to the communication of other that it actually is, not rewritten with arrogance presuming the supremacy of recency and presuming the conclusion that nothing means anything in the end.

You don’t hate The Rings of Power or The Last Jedi or The Wheel of Time series because they aren’t as good as the original. You hate them because they try to tell a story whose soul they don’t merely misunderstand but that they actively repudiate..

As recipients of such stories it is part of our duty as stewards to reject bad story: to call out narratives that breach the bounds of truth or violate the premise of the larger whole. Not just as passive consumers but as active custodians of the inheritance of literary excellence that has been passed down to us so that we can in turn hand off what is excellent in our time to those who come after us.

Review: Light of the Jedi

Light of the Jedi by Charles Soule

My rating: 2 of 5 stars


The Light of the Jedi is the first book in Disney’s new “High Republic” era, 200 years before the Prequel trilogy during a heyday of expansion of the Republic. This era appears to have been opened to try to gain some distance from the problems of the already established eras and particularly to try to avoid the fallout after the Last Jedi/Rise of Skywalker. The book is set up to give us moments of impressive coordination of Force Powers in the face of insurmountable odds. We are introduced to a wide cast of characters, with about half of them being Jedi and the rest being Republic government officials, people in need of rescuing, or the space-pirate villains called the Nihil (unironically and not in reference to Darth Nihilus though their “rule of three” is a bit suggestive of the triumvirate). But none of the characters are fleshed out enough in this volume or focused on enough with backstory and more than a brief idea of who they are. It is a crowded novel focused on introducing the era as a whole and starting a story than it is on providing meaningful character development and individual character depth; this is an acceptable failing in a first book in a series, but does not bode well.

-Spoiler Warning-

The first half of the novel is the description of an unfolding disaster and the expanding response of the Republic and the Jedi; it builds slowly and expands from one incident into a cascade of things going wrong. We get a healthy dose of heroics and big, impressive cataclysmic scenes of disaster. This works pretty well on its own: we have a hyperspace incident that leads to a wrecked spaceship that disintegrates and re-enters real-space in fragments going so fast that they will cause radical damage if they collide with anything. The chance that a collision in Hyperspace can happen at all is explained in the novel to some degree of satisfaction in a way that only just avoids breaking the universe. But the probability of any part of even the largest exploding ship randomly exiting hyperspace near a habited planet is astronomically small, and when you increase that to there being enough pieces in enough places scattered across the whole outer rim that it would threaten multiple systems over the space of a month while also having survivors within the wreckage it stretching the suspension of disbelief well beyond the breaking point. At least in this case the coincidence is working against the heroes which allows a lot more narrative leeway.

The Jedi response to the disaster is heroic and sacrificial, leading to some casualties in physical action and more due to the strain of using so much of the force; this is the best part of the novel, getting to see the Jedi Order in action and working together in numbers to do miraculous things. Even in the Clone Wars and Prequel era, this is the type of concerted action that was suggested would be possible but we never really got to see. Hyperspace asteroid mitigation at scale is an impressive logistics problem to solve even if the inciting incident is laughably implausible. I have some complaints about how the Jedi manage triage in the disaster: they send some Jedi (including named viewpoint characters) down to one planet to manage unrest and hijack a small private ship to assist in evacuation and send a team to a solar power-collection array to rescue 20 people while there are giant wreckage fragments that those same Jedi/Republic resources could be destroying or keeping from hitting planets and moons containing billions of people that are at risk.

The way that the Jedi and the Republic respond to the emergency brings out what seems to be the central theme of the novel: that tyrannical emergency powers and summary execution/use of force without democratic oversight are good and noble if people can be saved or convinced to do the “right” thing.

We are introduced to the current Republic Supreme Chancellor Lina Soh who enacts a hyperspace travel ban over the outer rim area affected by the potential hyperspace disaster; she is presented as a heroic leader who is helping people and expanding the light of civilization through her frequently mentioned “Great Works” including the Starlight Beacon, a large space station in the outer rim that is set to lynch-pin the expansion of republic oversight into the outer rim. She unilaterally authorizes commandeering nearly every nav-droid in the galaxy for a computational engine to predict the path of the disaster, shuts down all trade and travel in the affected secretor (and presumably far beyond the actual reach of the disaster) and authorizes the assembly of a galactic defense fleet to fight the space pirates that end up being behind the disaster with no mention or consideration of the political involvement of the senate or any kind of democratic deliberation. It’s almost like we are recapitulating the rise of Palpatine two-hundred years early without the realization that he is the bad guy. This could be considered as foreshadowing of future problems that could be explored about these tyrannical powers, but the way that the Republic tyranny is praised is also counter-pointed by the philosophy of the antagonist Nihil.

The book contains extensive passages introducing us to the Nihil and their space-pirate haven anarchist caricature. The Nihil have a magic hyperdrive that somehow allows them to navigate hyperspace in ways that normal hyperdrives can’t (which given how little hyperdrives in Star Wars are actually explained and limited isn’t really necessary other than to make them feel special and allow the original hyperspace disaster to happen without breaking the larger universe). Their group as a whole has an anarchistic “don’t follow the rules and take what you want” outlook on life, but are actually very regimented into a hierarchy with top-to-bottom chain of command with opportunities for advancement based on attacking each-other or taking advantage of any mistakes to replace their superior and take higher position. The top rank in the group is shared between three different leaders who each have about a third of the group under their command, creating a triumvirate of power with the mysterious hyperspace-shaman “Keeper of the Paths” holding a fourth seat of power without his own physical command, instead this fourth seat is granted because of control over the secret hyperdrive technology and the distribution of Paths that allow the marauders to attack from unexpected locations. The group has a secret base in “No-Space” a new pocket reality in sub-space that can only be reached by their “Path Engines” where they engaged in drugged-out parties and debauchery, they encourage recruitment as a way to elevate in the ranks and they murder anyone who makes the group weaker and they engage in clearly despicable backstabbing, pillaging, extortion in the face of disaster and terroristic attacks. But at the same time in the face of the encroaching republic tyranny they claim the goal of standing up for freedom and self-determination, so I can’t help but root for them a little in the face of the tyrannical Republic despite the way they are presented as the obvious and irredeemable bad guys. It is odd how much space in the book is given over to describing the perspective and philosophy of the bad guys if the point hadn’t been to lionize the authoritarian necessity of the Republic in resisting them. The whole novel would have been better played with a tighter cast and more mystery over the motivations and inner workings of the Nihil, saved for explication at a later date when the Jedi and Republic characters actually have contact with the group.

All in all, the novel was poor but not bad enough to be upsetting or damaging to the Star Wars universe as a whole (unlike the Last Jedi), but not interesting or outstanding enough to be good or excellent. I think I will try to read the second eventually just to see how it develops. I don’t really have a desire to spend more time with these characters, but I am interested to see if further stories in this era can draw me in. Even with all its flaws something with a similar template and concept would have made a far better Star Wars movie than The Force Awakens and the rest of the sequel trilogy, so I rate it as a step in the right direction, even if it is already too little, too late.




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Review: Fall; or, Dodge in Hell

Fall, Or Dodge in Hell by Neal Stephenson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Neal Stephenson’s Fall; or, Dodge in Hell is an exploration of the human relationship between the world that surrounds us, the mind that we use to experience it, and the ideas of other minds that influence our subjective experience of the world. The main premise of the work is exploring the possibility of replicating the function of human brains in a digital environment and thus achieving ‘immortality’ by uploading minds to a digital world. In the course of its exploration the novel attempts to be a science fiction thriller about a faked terrorist attack, a dystopian reflection on social media impact and the political divide of America, a secondary-world fantasy quest novel and a Miltonesqe retelling of the Bible, but the only thing it really could be said to succeed at is being transhumanist pro-mind-uploading propaganda.

Spoiler Warning

The ideas of the novel are fascinating but they are robbed of their power, impact, and meaning by the fact that the author does not allow the ideas to be questioned by the circumstances of the novel. The interesting moral and philosophical questions that could be raised by the plot concept surrounding death, life extension, and mind uploading are entirely swept under the rug with a dogmatic presentation of answers. There is no discussion of the problem presented by the possibilities of copying a ‘soul’ which immediately highlights the possibility that there might be a disconnect between the past living self and the future digitized self. Stephenson sidesteps the copy problem by presenting a mind-digitization process that is destructive and having it used only as a resort in the moment of normal death. The system the ‘souls’ are put in also is accidentally built on a secured system that does not allow outside interference or even communication and no ‘souls’ are ever copied. This removes from play the most powerful criticism of the concept of mind-uploading as a feasible technology and allows the novel to proceed into general acceptance of a digital afterlife with no real debate.

Before the mind-uploading into the digital world (which is somewhat blandly but amusingly referred to as ‘Bitworld’) begins the novel takes a side-track to explore a few plots attempting to tie together the core exploration of the fundamental working of human existence of living as a brain receiving signals and forming them into a view of the world based on patterns we have learned from past exposure to different signals. First a nuclear attack on an American city is faked on Social Media leading many people to continue believing far into the future that this city was destroyed by a nuclear attack while others receive the correction and learn to distrust the information they receive from new and old media. After that we go on to explore the fallout of this through an exaggerated projection of the rural/urban divide in near-future America with the elite being subscribed to editing services to cull the nonsense and wrong-think on the internet and the poor middle-Americans being fed crazy conspiracy nonsense that radicalizes them into what the coastal elite refer to in the novel as Ameristan. The radical party mentioned directly in this part of the story is called the Leviticans and believe that the New Testament is a collection of lies to weaken Christianity by presenting Jesus as loving and kind and that makes him a weak ‘beta-cuck’; they are a cult of guns and crucifixion led by a warlord in the middle of the USA and hold to Old Testament laws regarding homosexuality and wearing clothes of mixed-fibers and believe that the Bible commands gun ownership.

During this section of the novel one of the characters makes the claim that belief in the supernatural break your idea in the ‘real’ way the world works and makes you more susceptible to illogical memes and radicalization. This is a fundamental misunderstanding of what religion offers and clearly suggests that the author thinks that religious people are lesser, that if they believe one thing that the author thinks is false that they must be too stupid to understand the truth and are then open to all kinds of crazy falsehoods that separate them from other people and leaves them alienated. But this fundamentally is the opposite of how religion works; it provides a shared view of the world that brings people together and gives them communal cause, which can lead them to shared radicalization but does not leave them alone and unmoored at the same time.This negative characterization of religion also seems to be at odds with how religion is portrayed in the Bitworld as the main character begins to be worshiped and this behavior is not directly critiqued; indeed the whole conflict of the last half of the book stems from supporting one ‘god’ over another and ‘souls’ putting themselves in danger to support or oppose one or the other side without a clear set of beliefs. But the author is so intent on tearing down the supporting fabric of society in favor of a digital paradise that he can’t see which direction the religious parallels flow.

In addition to presenting that the coastal American elites are fundamentally superior due to the quality of the meme that they have constructed Stephenson also seems to propose that there is a tiered hierarchy of souls: the majority of the people whose minds are uploaded show no creative energy and merely copy basic human forms and customs, while the early adopters are made into magical beings by a combination of struggling against circumstance of imperfect copying technology and personal force of will to adapt their brains to the ability to shape their appearance and the world they find once they are uploaded. Dodge, the protagonist and first ‘soul’ to be uploaded struggles the most as he finds himself uploaded to a blank digital world as just a copy of his neural pathways at death and has to construct his identity and the entire world he lives in is treated as if he has a right to be a tyrant in this world while El, the transhumanist billionaire investor who financed much of the technological development that lead to Dodge being ‘awoken’ gains power by constructing dedicated server farms to throw more computing resources at his soul is seen as a usurper who does not deserve respect. But the powerful naturally accept worship and roles of leadership over the lesser beings and wow them with their supernatural powers without any consideration of appropriateness or morality of their actions. This hierarchy of souls creates an interesting reflection of mythological primary-world precursors as the novel slips into a sociological exploration of the development of the digital post-death society through a story that closely parallels the Bible but falls flat with no moral dimension. There is no debate or discussion of ideas: just a straight up power struggle over which super-powerful top-tier soul is to lead the realm. No presented path to salvation or self improvement, just the tenant that life is pain, suffering, and conflict that the brain wouldn’t accept without struggle.

There are moments that could be used to address the moral dimension of conflict between ‘souls’ that are just passed over. Early on Dodge (the protagonist Luciferian better tyrant in opposition to El the transhumanist tyrant who must be opposed for no clear reason other than Dodge and his friends can’t stand losing power) punishes an ordinary ‘soul’ for harming one of the lesser ‘gods’ by unmaking him with a Jovian thunderbolt. This action is presented as if it is right, but not really discussed or the ramifications explored. Later we learn that ‘souls’ when killed by more conventional means can reincarnate in the world, but there is no indication that this soul was not completely destroyed which seems to me a presumptuous power for Dodge to take over others that El is never shown to take for himself.

The book seems to be confused about a lot of things. The mind-uploading and pseudo-religious mythology of the secondary world is not criticized and is generally portrayed as a good thing so long as Dodge is in control and not El. The decay of the primary world into a self-sustaining robotic vessel for collecting more and more computing power to feed to the secondary world is not criticized and seems to be accepted as a reality with no consideration of the eventual entropy of the primary universe and what that will mean in the end for the simulated world. The relationship between the brain experiencing, influencing, creating and being created by the stimulus of the world around it is touched on but it does not have a large impact on the outcome of the story. The idea that death and sleep are essentially the same type of consciousness-ending process and the assumption that the brain is just like a computer that can be turned off and back on again is not questioned. But there are a lot of things about the text that don’t make sense if they aren’t questioning these ideas; why is Dodge portrayed in the Lucifer role; why is the title ‘Fall; or, Dodge in Hell’ referencing this whole story as about a fall, and where is the Hell that Dodge is said to be in? and why do the characters in the secondary world seem so unaware of their religious and eschatological practices that they have entered into if this is not itself supposed to be questioning whether the whole project of mind uploading was a good idea?

There are several parts of this novel that I really liked and in broad strokes it is an ambitious and potentially amazing story. The first third of the novel before Dodge is awoken in the digital world is pretty solid and has a lot of interesting ideas. The section right after his digital copy awakes and finds itself disembodied in the digital world and learns to interact with the digital world is really well done, but then it devolves into a much more boring quest story in a secondary world over a disjointed timeline and not nearly enough intellectual conflict or debate between the prime actors after the first half of the story. Since Stephenson obviously doesn’t understand or respect Christianity it is confusing to me why he chose to have his almost completely atheistic cast play out a retelling of the Bible in their digital Paradise. A proper respect for the meaning and understanding of the fundamentals of Christianity (or even merely Paradise Lost) could have made a fantastic set of connections. In my mind the shadow of this story that could have been overshadows the novel that is delivered.




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Review: The Dark Forest

The Dark ForestThe Dark Forest by Liu Cixin
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

The Dark Forest picks up where the Three-Body Problem left off. It tells the story of humanity preparing for an alien invasion that will occur hundreds of years in the future. Technology is locked into stagnation by the clever intervention of hyperintelligent AI the size of atomic particles, referred to as sophons, which have been deployed to interfere with particle physics experiments to create erroneous results. This technological block is supposed to keep humanity from progressing in the field of materials science. Can humanity rise to face this seemingly impossible task in time to stop the coming invasion?

Even though the book tries to present itself with a dark aura of catastrophe and impending doom in the face of a conflict with a vast technological difference it still manages to come off as naively optimistic. The idea that humanity could manage to muster even the slightest unified effort to face a threat that will not be real for four hundred years I find ultimately ridiculous.

Faced with this threat an (almost) unified human council called the Planetary Defense Council organizes what they call the Wallfacer project. They give 4 individuals unlimited and unquestioned access to resources to make plans in their own minds where the alien surveillance cannot instantly be aware of them. It is an original idea and plays out like a philosophical chess game as each of the Wallfacers develop their public and private plans and the alien intelligence and the co-opted human Wallbreakers move to counter them. This is easily the best part of the book though it would have been far more interesting (and effective) if the characters that were involved were more human and less robotic. The first three individuals chosen as Wallfacers are known political leaders and the third, the main character Luo Ji is a underachieving intellectual everyman whose qualification for the project is that he briefly studied cosmic sociology. Each Wallfacer develops their own stance in trying to face down the coming destruction, each plan is used (somewhat clumsily) to showcase different possible philosophical reactions.

As the book progresses we take a cryogenic time leap with our main characters as they rush forward in time to enact their plans to face the invasion. It is interesting to see how humanity has changed in the intervening years and it is refreshing to see that the pessimism of the earlier era has been done away with and the reassuring size and might of the earth space navy is exciting to hear about leading to an epic showdown with the alien vanguard, easily the second best part of the novel.

I appreciated the interweaving of natural imagery and passages of travel out into the wilderness with the harsh metal of the giant future-cities and space fleets that dominate the narrative. But the subplot where Luo Ji imagines a girlfriend while writing a novel and then asks his security guard to find a real girl like her and then subsequently marries her and has her used against him to motivate him to actually do something other than engage in dissolute hedonism was creepy, unnecessary and downright demeaning to female characters everywhere.

The final twist of the novel is a fascinating plan executed on foreshadowing given in the first few pages of the book and using almost nothing from the intervening five hundred pages. This conclusion is intellectually titillating but narratively unfulfilling, though it does set up a reversal and a massive widening of scope possible in the third book. It presents a sinister interpretation of the Fermi paradox that will be interesting to see play out in book three.

As with The Three-Body Problem I find myself reading the book and being fascinated by the thought experiments and the ideas that are being explored while at the same time being bored by the story and characters and confused by the emotions and motivations that are expressed. The idea that the elite professional and intellectual thinkers of the world would find the assured destruction of humanity in 400 years more intellectually and emotionally crippling that the knowledge of their own personal death in 30-40 years shows an interesting collectivist mindset alien to me. I am struggling to decide how much of that is from the divergence in shared cultural perspective and how much of it is just poor storytelling. Either way, this book is interesting and original but I can’t recommend it highly due to systemic problems with the characters and narrative style.

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Review: The Aeronaut’s Windlass

The Aeronaut's Windlass (The Cinder Spires, #1)The Aeronaut’s Windlass by Jim Butcher
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

The Aeronaut’s Windlass is a steampunk flavored fantasy adventure novel set in a post-apocalyptic setting. Humans live in ancient constructed habitats referred to as Spires. Cities built out of implausibly strong material that the inhabitants have no way to replicate that tower into the sky and who communicate, trade and battle with each-other using airships powered by “aetheric” currents and magic crystals. The novel attempts to capture the gritty post-apocalyptic feel of population pressure and dangerous environment alongside epic three-dimensional naval battles and fast-paced swashbuckling action. But if fails to reconcile these pressures and ends up with a sprawling cast of viewpoint characters who split the focus of the fast paced action and a light bantering tone and description-light style that detracts from the weight of danger the setting feels like it should have.

Jim Butcher is most well-known for the Dresden Files urban fantasy novels where his sarcastic and hard-bitten gumshoe wizard gets entangled in high-powered magic showdowns with a variety of magical beings. I have read and enjoyed a few of them and I definitely respect Butcher’s ability to weave a variety of references into his genre mashup framework. I recognize that some of the flaws that I see in the Aeronaut’s Windlass are present with Dresden it works better because of the character viewpoint focus on Dresden and the genres he is working with are tighter. Combining noir detective story, modern setting and fantasy leads to a tighter paced novel with a more unified perspective and less need to explain background to the reader. The combination of swashbuckling adventure tale and a post-apocalyptic setting with a fantasy framework leads to a much more sprawling story that lacks the focus to tighten the story and highlights the lack of depth in the characters.

The biggest problem I had with this novel was the characters. They were wooden archetypes and worse than that almost all of the dialog and character interaction could be predicted by guessing “what is the most cheeky thing to say or do in this situation” and then repeat from the other actors in the scene back and forth until you get tired of it. Everyone was making smart comments and striving for wit in a brash and irresponsible way. It didn’t matter if it was the bratty heir to a high house, the shy awkward girl, or the honorable but disgraced airship captain. It was in your face levity all the time. The villains were comically bad or just doing their duty. There just isn’t much nuance and glaringly obvious mysteries are the norm. The one exception to the characters all feeling the same were the mages, who are unironically and unabashedly insane, but in a childish “what are insane people like” sort of way. It made them convenient deus ex machina machines to showcase their powers but unreliable to actually be applied as part of a plan to deal with any situation.

The plot of the novel is a bit of a mess, I’m guessing here but I think the overarching plot may be intended as a kind of move-countermove representation of a larger game between two (or more) actors plotting large schemes with superhuman foresight selecting and positioning pawns in the right place to conveniently thwart each other’s plans. This sounds like it could be an interesting structure or idea, but the capricious nature of the external hand and the lack of knowledge of the pawns involved makes it narratively frustrating. The story leads to an impressive plot cascade where each move is answered and the full force of the enemy plans is never fully realized because the bigger action has already been blocked by something the characters have done. As such it feels like there is never any danger and the reaction to the circumstance seems obvious though the characters do somehow manage to muddle it up to make the situation worse than if they hadn’t split up or if they had any capacity for long term tactical thinking.

I would like to say that the worldbuilding is nice: it does not rely on exposition and we aren’t treated to long passages about the histories of the different Spires or why the setting is the way it is. The hints throughout the story that suggest things about the world are well placed. I am intrigued by the suggestions that metal is corroded by contact with air unless sheathed in copper and am very interested to see what the world looks like on the surface which we never see in this story.

The other things I enjoyed about this novel is the portrayal of the sentient cats the live in the underbelly of the Spires. The interactions with the cats are done in a way that is both plausible, entertaining and humorous, I was particularly fond of the viewpoint character who was a cat who keeps one of the other viewpoint characters as a pet. The other thing that was done quite well and I wanted more of was the airship battles. It is obvious that Butcher spent a lot of time thinking about the mechanics of how aeronatical tactics would work, the consequences of the technologies he had invented and the application of a third dimension to standard naval ship-to-ship combat. These action scenes were well paced and thrilling, but they were few and far between.

I am a little conflicted overall about this novel. I enjoyed parts of it but there were significant flaws in the execution that really disappointed me. I keep going back and forth: but I think in the end it intrigued me enough that I will probably try to pick up the next book when it comes out. However I have a hard time recommending it based on the first book alone.

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Review: Lock In

Lock In (Lock In, #1)Lock In by John Scalzi
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Lock In is a near-future crime story set in a future America. The setting is defined by Haden’s disease a flu-like disease epidemic that causes some of its sufferers to experience what they call “lock in” leaving their minds perfectly healthy but unable to move. In reaction to this symptom technology has been developed to allow people who suffer these symptoms to be able to interact with the world. Neural interfaces are developed that allows the user to connect directly to a virtual internet-like space called the Agora and to perceptually inhabit android bodies (called Threeps after everyone’s favorite annoying droid C-3PO from Star Wars) or other humans who have also been implanted with a neural interface. The story revolves around a locked in rich-kid joining the FBI in the midst of rising tensions as Federal funding for supporting victims of this disease is being withdrawn and follows a sequence of crimes that are related to violence against these digitally assisted humans.

I’ve read several of Scalzi’s other novels (Redshirts and Android’s Dream) so I was familiar with his style and I was not disappointed. His writing is clever and concise with a refreshing tone of wit throughout. This novel was a little bit more serious than the other novels I had read but still maintained an optimistic note of techno-optimism throughout. The worldbuilding is well done on the large and small scale, it is obvious that a lot of thought went into thinking about the disease symptoms and technological consequences. The narrative is involved with the technical and political ramifications but does not devolve into heavy-handed exposition. The world felt natural through the eyes of the characters who were themselves fun and enjoyable people to spend some time with.

The discussion of the partisan political debate as government considers decreasing funding that previously went to Haden’s research and healthcare for the victims is in the background of the novel with characters reacting in understandable personally motivated ways. I find it unlikely in the current political climate that the imagined bi-partisan effort could have unified behind spending the billions of dollars necessary to support the technology development and special treatment of the victims in the first place. And I also find it highly unlikely that if such technology as the neural network were available that it would be possible to restrict it only to victims of Haden’s. It is also strange to me that the use of Integrators is allowed, it seems to me the ethics of having a brain network implanted in your mind expressly for the purpose of allowing a locked-in individual to inhabit your body would be the subject of a heated debate. Most importantly the technology is handled with respect. The presentation of neural net coding and the security flaws, obsolescence and software development process described were refreshingly believable from a technical standpoint. I basically squealed with joy at the plausible description of the exploitation of a security flaw and the description of how it was accomplished and the resultant deployment of a security patch.

It is to the author’s credit that I didn’t realize until reading the discussion about it, but the main character, Chris Shane’s gender is never mentioned throughout the book. As expected I just kind of assumed that he was a white male, but that is mostly because I am a white male, I know Scalzi is a white male and I listened to the audiobook narrated by Wil Wheaton who is also a white male. There is another version of the audiobook narrated by Amber Benson for this reason. Looking back on the novel it makes sense that since Chis doesn’t inhabit his own body for most of his life that he doesn’t associate strongly with gender.

The plot is that of an exciting action-thriller with clever twists and turns and it holds together until the end when the motivations and execution of the overarching plot turn on a comically implausible super-villain economics. Other than that it was a refreshing quick and exciting read. It manages to accomplish two things very well. It provides a framework to explore concepts of self and identity while giving us a diverse cast of characters and a fun and engaging plot that manages to stay lighthearted and endearing throughout.

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Review: The Hero of Ages

The Hero of Ages (Mistborn, #3)The Hero of Ages by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

The Hero of Ages is the conclusion to the first Mistborn trilogy, neatly wrapping up all the elements of the world introduced in the past two books and tying everything together with a neat and tidy bow. This is an example of Sanderson’s ability to take all the little world-building details of his work and tying everything together with almost obsessive consistency. There are no loose plot threads, everything comes together in the conclusion and elements introduced along the way that you didn’t even realize were mysteries are revealed. This attention to detail and care for consistency and conclusion make this novel stand out despite its other flaws.

*Spoilers Final Empire and Well of Ascension*

After the conclusion of the second book, Eland has been left in charge of the largest part of the remains of the misnamed Final Empire with Vin at his side and the world coming to an end around them as the manifestation of deific power called Ruin was released from its prison in the Well of Ascension. Can they unite humanity in the face of the dangers of the world and will Vin be able to fulfill the role of the Hero of Ages as foretold by the pre-Emipre religion?

The book reflects on what religious truth means and explores both the struggle between faith and logic and the way religious beliefs can quickly diverge from truth when shaped by individual perceptions. Sanderson presents religious fanaticism as an obstacle that keeps people who share the world with a deific being intent on destroying everything from working together to save the world. We are shown elements of radical Survivor-ism worshiping Kelsier and dragging the world to Ruin in one city and elements of what is left of the Lord Ruler’s organized church struggling to preserve the status quo which also poses a threat to the forces trying to fight Ruin directly to save the world. It is also interesting to see the take on the prophetically ordained savior, as the words of the past are filtered through falsehood by the passage of time and the twisting influence of Ruin. I am always wary of the prophecy trope but I think that it was applied with sufficient subtlety in this case.

I appreciated the way that the human antagonists were humanized. We are given glimpses into the mind of the Lord Ruler that almost redeem the way he oppressed the people and polluted the world. And Yoman is an excellent addition as a foil for Eland with his faith in the Lord Ruler motivating his resistance. However the conclusion is also hampered by the true villain being an elemental force of god-power whose sole goal is encapsulated in his name: Ruin is as stereotypical evil destructive force with no nuance and sympathy, which makes him an uninspiring antagonist.

The craft of writing is not Sanderson’s best here, the text is rendered in clear and usually invisible standard American english, but there are a few times that jarring use of modern colloquialism or word choice stood out for me as harmful to the tone of the setting. But overall I enjoy the clean and workmanlike translation of the world into simple standard language though the dialog is occasionally awkward and unrealistic, particularly when working with group scenes.

Overall the characterization has improved, you get a good sense of the different characters insecurities and their progression to dealing with changing circumstances. The characters each have their journeys. Eland has grown so much, and Vin has managed to transition out of her angsty teenage phase, but they still feel a little lackluster. Of particular positive note in this story are Sazed, Spook, and TenSoon’s character progressions, they all carry their parts of the story very well.

Ultimately this book does an excellent job of concluding all the threads in the series and providing an epic showdown of humanity in the face of apocalypse. But it still manages to not live up to the first book. All of the characters are shown with heavy doubts, which weigh them down as they face their all-powerful foe, but they lack the will and charisma that Kelsier had while he stared certain death in the face, laughed and carried on his a plan to survive anyway. It is understandable that Kelsier is worshipped in this world, but it is sad that his direct followers spend most of their time wallowing in self-doubt and following the plans of those that came before them to try to fix the world. They are interesting characters, and it is to their credit that they keep fighting even in the face of their doubts, but it just lacks the spark of will that Kelsier carried.

It was sad to say goodbye to this world on such a final note, but that sorrow is much alleviated by the existence of Alloy of Law and the continuation of the Mistborn world in the second era novels that follow after it which are excellent in their own right and benefit immensely from being grounded in the lore established in this trilogy.

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Review: MaddAddam

MaddAddam (MaddAddam, #3)MaddAddam by Margaret Atwood
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Oryx and Crake, the first book in the Maddaddam Trilogy, isolated it’s protagonist Jimmy with his experiences, guilt, regrets and memories. The Year of the Flood also isolated it’s protagonists with their wounds and consequences. MaddAddam brings them all together and they need each other to survive. This novel is about relationships and healing. About synthesis bringing disparate elements together in the face of external threat to meet shared goals. Jimmy alone is sick and weak and unable to take care of himself, he needs help from others to survive. Toby is strong and capable but she still needs others to lean on to pull herself out of depression and inaction. Ren and Amanda need others around them to hold up to the pressures of the world and put themselves back together after their traumatic experiences. And most of all the genetically engineered and naive Crakers need some of the knowledge and interpretation of the apocalypse that destroyed humanity to survive.

Even now after the apocalypse in the ashes of society humanity has survived. Not just the God’s Gardeners, MaddAddamites, Jimmy and the Crakers. Some of the worst of humanity have survived are criminals convicted of horrible crimes and forced to participate in the televised death-sport called Painball where they were encouraged to live in savagery and violence for the entertainment of others. Evil still exists and so in the Garden of Eden Crake created by killing the vast majority of the world the period of childhood for the Crakers is ended, bringing pain and suffering and confusion to their world. Can they encompass the changes in mindset to allow them to live in this world? Can they conceptualize evil and how will they react to it?

In the earlier books a numb acceptance of the debauchery of the world suffuses most of the world before the flood. People exist merely to survive amidst the corporate greed, hedonistic excess and rampant consumerism of the corporate controlled world with little to no eye on morality. There are no consequences before the flood for rapists, murderers, abusers and child molesters. Those that try to stand up to the weight of the direction of the world are beaten down and ridiculed, forced to segregate themselves and try to live unaffected by the world around them, but that isn’t tenable and everyone is tainted by the excess of the world. Zeb, Toby, Ren, Amanda. None of them are unaffected by the world around them. They are changed and broken by it but they take action to rise above.

MaddAddam also gives us more backstory about the world before the “waterless flood”, we learn more about Adam One and Zeb. The way everything is tied together with Zeb’s story being told to Toby as they grow an intimate relationship and her relaying parts of that story to the Crakers who integrate it into their nascent mythology is intricate and heartfelt. The petrobaptist megachurch/corporation is amusingly conceived if hyperbolic. Zeb and his comparison to Adam One is interesting and the parallels they go through in their development from beginning to end. The depiction of humanity at its most base, with Painball punishment, greedy religious leaders serving corporate interests and perverse sexual abuse enabled by technology is wearing. The parts of the old world that we are shown it is easy to see the desire to wipe it clean. The chance to make it right.

And Toby is given that chance through the Crakers as they come to her to continue the storytelling tradition that Jimmy established. Through this tradition we are given a glimpse into the power of storytelling as Toby realizes the effects that she is having on the innocent Crakers. She re-frames the story of their creation and the destruction of humanity to try to help them understand while also sheltering them from ideas that she thinks could corrupt them. She adds stories about Zeb to their mythology and uses the stories as a way to explain things the Crakers can’t conceptualize on their own. She gives them the gift of written language to help them remember the stories of the past.

I was a little conflicted by the coincidence that everyone that survived the epidemic was related to Jimmy’s past life. It made the story tightly woven and delightfully self-referential at times. But the implausibility shrank the scope of the world and weakened the impact of the disaster. If all these people survived just because they at one point dated Jimmy then it seems probable that large numbers of people who haven’t dated Jimmy have also survived and just not made it to the tiny geographic bounds explored in the novel.

In reading the other reviews on Goodreads for MaddAddam I found that many of them fell into two camps: those that worship Atwood unquestioningly and gave the book 5 stars with little thought to the why (frequently mentioning her as a pioneer of feminist literature) and others who also praised her for her feminism but criticized this book as a disappointment because it showed Toby, Ren and Amanda in weaker positions, Toby particularly is criticized as fawning over Zeb like a besotted schoolgirl. But these criticisms and praise seem to me to miss the central point of the story and the skill that Atwood has displayed in weaving characters and story together about so much more than just women being equal to men.

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Review: The Well of Ascension

The Well of Ascension (Mistborn, #2)The Well of Ascension by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

*Spoilers Mistborn: the Final Empire*

In this second book of the Mistborn trilogy Kelsier’s crew of thieves and con-men have to figure out how to deal with success after deposing their totalitarian god-king. Now they have to rule in his place without his god-like powers or the stability granted by a thousand years of legitimacy. The empire is gone, fractured overnight into a collection of warring kingdoms and several of the most powerful warlords set out to conquer Luthadel, the capital city where Kelsier’s crew have set up their own attempt at government.

The tight pacing and plan-focused narrative drive of the first novel is replaced by a more reactionary plot as the characters adapt to roles in the fledgling government. The novel suffers some as the characters become less archetypal and more confused in their roles. It works from a plot perspective, and the characters need to be unsure of themselves as they try to adapt from being revolutionaries to ruling. But the transitions character arcs mean that we are stuck in transition with some awkwardly presented characterization as they try to change to their new situation.

The siege of Luthadel as the neighboring kings come to claim the wealth of the empire and compete for the legitimacy of holding the old capital city. This siege is a central point of the plot but it hangs over the story without urgency and the effects are rarely felt as the characters work on resolving internal conflicts. The same lack of urgency plagues the mystery presented by evidence that a shape-shifting Kandra has infiltrated the group. The effort to address either of these issues is sporadic and drawn out with long gaps between attempts to deal with these issues as other character points become more pressing. Both conflicts are played as plot points and feel artificially paced to resolve at the end of the story and are drawn out in time to allow the other events to occur. Instead of the characters having a clear goal that they are working towards with a plan which is challenged the plot hinges around characters trying to meet the demands of their situation from one state of mind and needing to move to a state of mind where they can take actions to change the situation.

That said. The mysteries that are revealed as the plot unfolds are very interesting and the book manages to transition the arc of the whole trilogy from the setting establishing work of the Final Empire to the events of Hero of Ages, moving to a completely different phase of the world with impressive escalation of urgency and scope. I really enjoyed Vin’s interactions with the Kandra OreSeur as she takes over his contract and works with him. And Sazed is solid in this story as he holds the group together with his conviction and faith in the individual members of the crew and the goal that they are trying to accomplish. His knowledge of religions and the exploration into the background of the Lord Ruler and the ancient religion of Terris are some of the best parts of the book tying into the mystery and depth of the setting in unexpected and satisfying ways.

One of the themes that comes up frequently in Sanderson’s books is the reflection on what it means to be a leader and how to handle the responsibility of ruling. This is often a secondary theme to the explorations about the process of deification and the conversation is sometimes a little confused by his mixing of the two. Deification and the qualities needed to rule rightly are not always granted to the same people in his body of work: we are definitely shown gods who do not have the qualities that make a good ruler and we are shown simple men who learn how to rule at least with a modicum of wisdom, but those same simple men are frequently rewarded in the text by the gift of godlike powers as a consequence which can cheapen the qualities that made them good rulers or lead them to make decisions that prove them to be not ready to rule at that level.

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