Light of the Jedi by Charles Soule
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
The Light of the Jedi is the first book in Disney’s new “High Republic” era, 200 years before the Prequel trilogy during a heyday of expansion of the Republic. This era appears to have been opened to try to gain some distance from the problems of the already established eras and particularly to try to avoid the fallout after the Last Jedi/Rise of Skywalker. The book is set up to give us moments of impressive coordination of Force Powers in the face of insurmountable odds. We are introduced to a wide cast of characters, with about half of them being Jedi and the rest being Republic government officials, people in need of rescuing, or the space-pirate villains called the Nihil (unironically and not in reference to Darth Nihilus though their “rule of three” is a bit suggestive of the triumvirate). But none of the characters are fleshed out enough in this volume or focused on enough with backstory and more than a brief idea of who they are. It is a crowded novel focused on introducing the era as a whole and starting a story than it is on providing meaningful character development and individual character depth; this is an acceptable failing in a first book in a series, but does not bode well.
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The first half of the novel is the description of an unfolding disaster and the expanding response of the Republic and the Jedi; it builds slowly and expands from one incident into a cascade of things going wrong. We get a healthy dose of heroics and big, impressive cataclysmic scenes of disaster. This works pretty well on its own: we have a hyperspace incident that leads to a wrecked spaceship that disintegrates and re-enters real-space in fragments going so fast that they will cause radical damage if they collide with anything. The chance that a collision in Hyperspace can happen at all is explained in the novel to some degree of satisfaction in a way that only just avoids breaking the universe. But the probability of any part of even the largest exploding ship randomly exiting hyperspace near a habited planet is astronomically small, and when you increase that to there being enough pieces in enough places scattered across the whole outer rim that it would threaten multiple systems over the space of a month while also having survivors within the wreckage it stretching the suspension of disbelief well beyond the breaking point. At least in this case the coincidence is working against the heroes which allows a lot more narrative leeway.
The Jedi response to the disaster is heroic and sacrificial, leading to some casualties in physical action and more due to the strain of using so much of the force; this is the best part of the novel, getting to see the Jedi Order in action and working together in numbers to do miraculous things. Even in the Clone Wars and Prequel era, this is the type of concerted action that was suggested would be possible but we never really got to see. Hyperspace asteroid mitigation at scale is an impressive logistics problem to solve even if the inciting incident is laughably implausible. I have some complaints about how the Jedi manage triage in the disaster: they send some Jedi (including named viewpoint characters) down to one planet to manage unrest and hijack a small private ship to assist in evacuation and send a team to a solar power-collection array to rescue 20 people while there are giant wreckage fragments that those same Jedi/Republic resources could be destroying or keeping from hitting planets and moons containing billions of people that are at risk.
The way that the Jedi and the Republic respond to the emergency brings out what seems to be the central theme of the novel: that tyrannical emergency powers and summary execution/use of force without democratic oversight are good and noble if people can be saved or convinced to do the “right” thing.
We are introduced to the current Republic Supreme Chancellor Lina Soh who enacts a hyperspace travel ban over the outer rim area affected by the potential hyperspace disaster; she is presented as a heroic leader who is helping people and expanding the light of civilization through her frequently mentioned “Great Works” including the Starlight Beacon, a large space station in the outer rim that is set to lynch-pin the expansion of republic oversight into the outer rim. She unilaterally authorizes commandeering nearly every nav-droid in the galaxy for a computational engine to predict the path of the disaster, shuts down all trade and travel in the affected secretor (and presumably far beyond the actual reach of the disaster) and authorizes the assembly of a galactic defense fleet to fight the space pirates that end up being behind the disaster with no mention or consideration of the political involvement of the senate or any kind of democratic deliberation. It’s almost like we are recapitulating the rise of Palpatine two-hundred years early without the realization that he is the bad guy. This could be considered as foreshadowing of future problems that could be explored about these tyrannical powers, but the way that the Republic tyranny is praised is also counter-pointed by the philosophy of the antagonist Nihil.
The book contains extensive passages introducing us to the Nihil and their space-pirate haven anarchist caricature. The Nihil have a magic hyperdrive that somehow allows them to navigate hyperspace in ways that normal hyperdrives can’t (which given how little hyperdrives in Star Wars are actually explained and limited isn’t really necessary other than to make them feel special and allow the original hyperspace disaster to happen without breaking the larger universe). Their group as a whole has an anarchistic “don’t follow the rules and take what you want” outlook on life, but are actually very regimented into a hierarchy with top-to-bottom chain of command with opportunities for advancement based on attacking each-other or taking advantage of any mistakes to replace their superior and take higher position. The top rank in the group is shared between three different leaders who each have about a third of the group under their command, creating a triumvirate of power with the mysterious hyperspace-shaman “Keeper of the Paths” holding a fourth seat of power without his own physical command, instead this fourth seat is granted because of control over the secret hyperdrive technology and the distribution of Paths that allow the marauders to attack from unexpected locations. The group has a secret base in “No-Space” a new pocket reality in sub-space that can only be reached by their “Path Engines” where they engaged in drugged-out parties and debauchery, they encourage recruitment as a way to elevate in the ranks and they murder anyone who makes the group weaker and they engage in clearly despicable backstabbing, pillaging, extortion in the face of disaster and terroristic attacks. But at the same time in the face of the encroaching republic tyranny they claim the goal of standing up for freedom and self-determination, so I can’t help but root for them a little in the face of the tyrannical Republic despite the way they are presented as the obvious and irredeemable bad guys. It is odd how much space in the book is given over to describing the perspective and philosophy of the bad guys if the point hadn’t been to lionize the authoritarian necessity of the Republic in resisting them. The whole novel would have been better played with a tighter cast and more mystery over the motivations and inner workings of the Nihil, saved for explication at a later date when the Jedi and Republic characters actually have contact with the group.
All in all, the novel was poor but not bad enough to be upsetting or damaging to the Star Wars universe as a whole (unlike the Last Jedi), but not interesting or outstanding enough to be good or excellent. I think I will try to read the second eventually just to see how it develops. I don’t really have a desire to spend more time with these characters, but I am interested to see if further stories in this era can draw me in. Even with all its flaws something with a similar template and concept would have made a far better Star Wars movie than The Force Awakens and the rest of the sequel trilogy, so I rate it as a step in the right direction, even if it is already too little, too late.
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Fall, Or Dodge in Hell by Neal Stephenson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Neal Stephenson’s Fall; or, Dodge in Hell is an exploration of the human relationship between the world that surrounds us, the mind that we use to experience it, and the ideas of other minds that influence our subjective experience of the world. The main premise of the work is exploring the possibility of replicating the function of human brains in a digital environment and thus achieving ‘immortality’ by uploading minds to a digital world. In the course of its exploration the novel attempts to be a science fiction thriller about a faked terrorist attack, a dystopian reflection on social media impact and the political divide of America, a secondary-world fantasy quest novel and a Miltonesqe retelling of the Bible, but the only thing it really could be said to succeed at is being transhumanist pro-mind-uploading propaganda.
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The ideas of the novel are fascinating but they are robbed of their power, impact, and meaning by the fact that the author does not allow the ideas to be questioned by the circumstances of the novel. The interesting moral and philosophical questions that could be raised by the plot concept surrounding death, life extension, and mind uploading are entirely swept under the rug with a dogmatic presentation of answers. There is no discussion of the problem presented by the possibilities of copying a ‘soul’ which immediately highlights the possibility that there might be a disconnect between the past living self and the future digitized self. Stephenson sidesteps the copy problem by presenting a mind-digitization process that is destructive and having it used only as a resort in the moment of normal death. The system the ‘souls’ are put in also is accidentally built on a secured system that does not allow outside interference or even communication and no ‘souls’ are ever copied. This removes from play the most powerful criticism of the concept of mind-uploading as a feasible technology and allows the novel to proceed into general acceptance of a digital afterlife with no real debate.
Before the mind-uploading into the digital world (which is somewhat blandly but amusingly referred to as ‘Bitworld’) begins the novel takes a side-track to explore a few plots attempting to tie together the core exploration of the fundamental working of human existence of living as a brain receiving signals and forming them into a view of the world based on patterns we have learned from past exposure to different signals. First a nuclear attack on an American city is faked on Social Media leading many people to continue believing far into the future that this city was destroyed by a nuclear attack while others receive the correction and learn to distrust the information they receive from new and old media. After that we go on to explore the fallout of this through an exaggerated projection of the rural/urban divide in near-future America with the elite being subscribed to editing services to cull the nonsense and wrong-think on the internet and the poor middle-Americans being fed crazy conspiracy nonsense that radicalizes them into what the coastal elite refer to in the novel as Ameristan. The radical party mentioned directly in this part of the story is called the Leviticans and believe that the New Testament is a collection of lies to weaken Christianity by presenting Jesus as loving and kind and that makes him a weak ‘beta-cuck’; they are a cult of guns and crucifixion led by a warlord in the middle of the USA and hold to Old Testament laws regarding homosexuality and wearing clothes of mixed-fibers and believe that the Bible commands gun ownership.
During this section of the novel one of the characters makes the claim that belief in the supernatural break your idea in the ‘real’ way the world works and makes you more susceptible to illogical memes and radicalization. This is a fundamental misunderstanding of what religion offers and clearly suggests that the author thinks that religious people are lesser, that if they believe one thing that the author thinks is false that they must be too stupid to understand the truth and are then open to all kinds of crazy falsehoods that separate them from other people and leaves them alienated. But this fundamentally is the opposite of how religion works; it provides a shared view of the world that brings people together and gives them communal cause, which can lead them to shared radicalization but does not leave them alone and unmoored at the same time.This negative characterization of religion also seems to be at odds with how religion is portrayed in the Bitworld as the main character begins to be worshiped and this behavior is not directly critiqued; indeed the whole conflict of the last half of the book stems from supporting one ‘god’ over another and ‘souls’ putting themselves in danger to support or oppose one or the other side without a clear set of beliefs. But the author is so intent on tearing down the supporting fabric of society in favor of a digital paradise that he can’t see which direction the religious parallels flow.
In addition to presenting that the coastal American elites are fundamentally superior due to the quality of the meme that they have constructed Stephenson also seems to propose that there is a tiered hierarchy of souls: the majority of the people whose minds are uploaded show no creative energy and merely copy basic human forms and customs, while the early adopters are made into magical beings by a combination of struggling against circumstance of imperfect copying technology and personal force of will to adapt their brains to the ability to shape their appearance and the world they find once they are uploaded. Dodge, the protagonist and first ‘soul’ to be uploaded struggles the most as he finds himself uploaded to a blank digital world as just a copy of his neural pathways at death and has to construct his identity and the entire world he lives in is treated as if he has a right to be a tyrant in this world while El, the transhumanist billionaire investor who financed much of the technological development that lead to Dodge being ‘awoken’ gains power by constructing dedicated server farms to throw more computing resources at his soul is seen as a usurper who does not deserve respect. But the powerful naturally accept worship and roles of leadership over the lesser beings and wow them with their supernatural powers without any consideration of appropriateness or morality of their actions. This hierarchy of souls creates an interesting reflection of mythological primary-world precursors as the novel slips into a sociological exploration of the development of the digital post-death society through a story that closely parallels the Bible but falls flat with no moral dimension. There is no debate or discussion of ideas: just a straight up power struggle over which super-powerful top-tier soul is to lead the realm. No presented path to salvation or self improvement, just the tenant that life is pain, suffering, and conflict that the brain wouldn’t accept without struggle.
There are moments that could be used to address the moral dimension of conflict between ‘souls’ that are just passed over. Early on Dodge (the protagonist Luciferian better tyrant in opposition to El the transhumanist tyrant who must be opposed for no clear reason other than Dodge and his friends can’t stand losing power) punishes an ordinary ‘soul’ for harming one of the lesser ‘gods’ by unmaking him with a Jovian thunderbolt. This action is presented as if it is right, but not really discussed or the ramifications explored. Later we learn that ‘souls’ when killed by more conventional means can reincarnate in the world, but there is no indication that this soul was not completely destroyed which seems to me a presumptuous power for Dodge to take over others that El is never shown to take for himself.
The book seems to be confused about a lot of things. The mind-uploading and pseudo-religious mythology of the secondary world is not criticized and is generally portrayed as a good thing so long as Dodge is in control and not El. The decay of the primary world into a self-sustaining robotic vessel for collecting more and more computing power to feed to the secondary world is not criticized and seems to be accepted as a reality with no consideration of the eventual entropy of the primary universe and what that will mean in the end for the simulated world. The relationship between the brain experiencing, influencing, creating and being created by the stimulus of the world around it is touched on but it does not have a large impact on the outcome of the story. The idea that death and sleep are essentially the same type of consciousness-ending process and the assumption that the brain is just like a computer that can be turned off and back on again is not questioned. But there are a lot of things about the text that don’t make sense if they aren’t questioning these ideas; why is Dodge portrayed in the Lucifer role; why is the title ‘Fall; or, Dodge in Hell’ referencing this whole story as about a fall, and where is the Hell that Dodge is said to be in? and why do the characters in the secondary world seem so unaware of their religious and eschatological practices that they have entered into if this is not itself supposed to be questioning whether the whole project of mind uploading was a good idea?
There are several parts of this novel that I really liked and in broad strokes it is an ambitious and potentially amazing story. The first third of the novel before Dodge is awoken in the digital world is pretty solid and has a lot of interesting ideas. The section right after his digital copy awakes and finds itself disembodied in the digital world and learns to interact with the digital world is really well done, but then it devolves into a much more boring quest story in a secondary world over a disjointed timeline and not nearly enough intellectual conflict or debate between the prime actors after the first half of the story. Since Stephenson obviously doesn’t understand or respect Christianity it is confusing to me why he chose to have his almost completely atheistic cast play out a retelling of the Bible in their digital Paradise. A proper respect for the meaning and understanding of the fundamentals of Christianity (or even merely Paradise Lost) could have made a fantastic set of connections. In my mind the shadow of this story that could have been overshadows the novel that is delivered.
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The Dark Forest by Liu Cixin
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
The Dark Forest picks up where the Three-Body Problem left off. It tells the story of humanity preparing for an alien invasion that will occur hundreds of years in the future. Technology is locked into stagnation by the clever intervention of hyperintelligent AI the size of atomic particles, referred to as sophons, which have been deployed to interfere with particle physics experiments to create erroneous results. This technological block is supposed to keep humanity from progressing in the field of materials science. Can humanity rise to face this seemingly impossible task in time to stop the coming invasion?
Even though the book tries to present itself with a dark aura of catastrophe and impending doom in the face of a conflict with a vast technological difference it still manages to come off as naively optimistic. The idea that humanity could manage to muster even the slightest unified effort to face a threat that will not be real for four hundred years I find ultimately ridiculous.
Faced with this threat an (almost) unified human council called the Planetary Defense Council organizes what they call the Wallfacer project. They give 4 individuals unlimited and unquestioned access to resources to make plans in their own minds where the alien surveillance cannot instantly be aware of them. It is an original idea and plays out like a philosophical chess game as each of the Wallfacers develop their public and private plans and the alien intelligence and the co-opted human Wallbreakers move to counter them. This is easily the best part of the book though it would have been far more interesting (and effective) if the characters that were involved were more human and less robotic. The first three individuals chosen as Wallfacers are known political leaders and the third, the main character Luo Ji is a underachieving intellectual everyman whose qualification for the project is that he briefly studied cosmic sociology. Each Wallfacer develops their own stance in trying to face down the coming destruction, each plan is used (somewhat clumsily) to showcase different possible philosophical reactions.
As the book progresses we take a cryogenic time leap with our main characters as they rush forward in time to enact their plans to face the invasion. It is interesting to see how humanity has changed in the intervening years and it is refreshing to see that the pessimism of the earlier era has been done away with and the reassuring size and might of the earth space navy is exciting to hear about leading to an epic showdown with the alien vanguard, easily the second best part of the novel.
I appreciated the interweaving of natural imagery and passages of travel out into the wilderness with the harsh metal of the giant future-cities and space fleets that dominate the narrative. But the subplot where Luo Ji imagines a girlfriend while writing a novel and then asks his security guard to find a real girl like her and then subsequently marries her and has her used against him to motivate him to actually do something other than engage in dissolute hedonism was creepy, unnecessary and downright demeaning to female characters everywhere.
The final twist of the novel is a fascinating plan executed on foreshadowing given in the first few pages of the book and using almost nothing from the intervening five hundred pages. This conclusion is intellectually titillating but narratively unfulfilling, though it does set up a reversal and a massive widening of scope possible in the third book. It presents a sinister interpretation of the Fermi paradox that will be interesting to see play out in book three.
As with The Three-Body Problem I find myself reading the book and being fascinated by the thought experiments and the ideas that are being explored while at the same time being bored by the story and characters and confused by the emotions and motivations that are expressed. The idea that the elite professional and intellectual thinkers of the world would find the assured destruction of humanity in 400 years more intellectually and emotionally crippling that the knowledge of their own personal death in 30-40 years shows an interesting collectivist mindset alien to me. I am struggling to decide how much of that is from the divergence in shared cultural perspective and how much of it is just poor storytelling. Either way, this book is interesting and original but I can’t recommend it highly due to systemic problems with the characters and narrative style.
The Aeronaut’s Windlass by Jim Butcher
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
The Aeronaut’s Windlass is a steampunk flavored fantasy adventure novel set in a post-apocalyptic setting. Humans live in ancient constructed habitats referred to as Spires. Cities built out of implausibly strong material that the inhabitants have no way to replicate that tower into the sky and who communicate, trade and battle with each-other using airships powered by “aetheric” currents and magic crystals. The novel attempts to capture the gritty post-apocalyptic feel of population pressure and dangerous environment alongside epic three-dimensional naval battles and fast-paced swashbuckling action. But if fails to reconcile these pressures and ends up with a sprawling cast of viewpoint characters who split the focus of the fast paced action and a light bantering tone and description-light style that detracts from the weight of danger the setting feels like it should have.
Jim Butcher is most well-known for the Dresden Files urban fantasy novels where his sarcastic and hard-bitten gumshoe wizard gets entangled in high-powered magic showdowns with a variety of magical beings. I have read and enjoyed a few of them and I definitely respect Butcher’s ability to weave a variety of references into his genre mashup framework. I recognize that some of the flaws that I see in the Aeronaut’s Windlass are present with Dresden it works better because of the character viewpoint focus on Dresden and the genres he is working with are tighter. Combining noir detective story, modern setting and fantasy leads to a tighter paced novel with a more unified perspective and less need to explain background to the reader. The combination of swashbuckling adventure tale and a post-apocalyptic setting with a fantasy framework leads to a much more sprawling story that lacks the focus to tighten the story and highlights the lack of depth in the characters.
The biggest problem I had with this novel was the characters. They were wooden archetypes and worse than that almost all of the dialog and character interaction could be predicted by guessing “what is the most cheeky thing to say or do in this situation” and then repeat from the other actors in the scene back and forth until you get tired of it. Everyone was making smart comments and striving for wit in a brash and irresponsible way. It didn’t matter if it was the bratty heir to a high house, the shy awkward girl, or the honorable but disgraced airship captain. It was in your face levity all the time. The villains were comically bad or just doing their duty. There just isn’t much nuance and glaringly obvious mysteries are the norm. The one exception to the characters all feeling the same were the mages, who are unironically and unabashedly insane, but in a childish “what are insane people like” sort of way. It made them convenient deus ex machina machines to showcase their powers but unreliable to actually be applied as part of a plan to deal with any situation.
The plot of the novel is a bit of a mess, I’m guessing here but I think the overarching plot may be intended as a kind of move-countermove representation of a larger game between two (or more) actors plotting large schemes with superhuman foresight selecting and positioning pawns in the right place to conveniently thwart each other’s plans. This sounds like it could be an interesting structure or idea, but the capricious nature of the external hand and the lack of knowledge of the pawns involved makes it narratively frustrating. The story leads to an impressive plot cascade where each move is answered and the full force of the enemy plans is never fully realized because the bigger action has already been blocked by something the characters have done. As such it feels like there is never any danger and the reaction to the circumstance seems obvious though the characters do somehow manage to muddle it up to make the situation worse than if they hadn’t split up or if they had any capacity for long term tactical thinking.
I would like to say that the worldbuilding is nice: it does not rely on exposition and we aren’t treated to long passages about the histories of the different Spires or why the setting is the way it is. The hints throughout the story that suggest things about the world are well placed. I am intrigued by the suggestions that metal is corroded by contact with air unless sheathed in copper and am very interested to see what the world looks like on the surface which we never see in this story.
The other things I enjoyed about this novel is the portrayal of the sentient cats the live in the underbelly of the Spires. The interactions with the cats are done in a way that is both plausible, entertaining and humorous, I was particularly fond of the viewpoint character who was a cat who keeps one of the other viewpoint characters as a pet. The other thing that was done quite well and I wanted more of was the airship battles. It is obvious that Butcher spent a lot of time thinking about the mechanics of how aeronatical tactics would work, the consequences of the technologies he had invented and the application of a third dimension to standard naval ship-to-ship combat. These action scenes were well paced and thrilling, but they were few and far between.
I am a little conflicted overall about this novel. I enjoyed parts of it but there were significant flaws in the execution that really disappointed me. I keep going back and forth: but I think in the end it intrigued me enough that I will probably try to pick up the next book when it comes out. However I have a hard time recommending it based on the first book alone.
Lock In by John Scalzi
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Lock In is a near-future crime story set in a future America. The setting is defined by Haden’s disease a flu-like disease epidemic that causes some of its sufferers to experience what they call “lock in” leaving their minds perfectly healthy but unable to move. In reaction to this symptom technology has been developed to allow people who suffer these symptoms to be able to interact with the world. Neural interfaces are developed that allows the user to connect directly to a virtual internet-like space called the Agora and to perceptually inhabit android bodies (called Threeps after everyone’s favorite annoying droid C-3PO from Star Wars) or other humans who have also been implanted with a neural interface. The story revolves around a locked in rich-kid joining the FBI in the midst of rising tensions as Federal funding for supporting victims of this disease is being withdrawn and follows a sequence of crimes that are related to violence against these digitally assisted humans.
I’ve read several of Scalzi’s other novels (Redshirts and Android’s Dream) so I was familiar with his style and I was not disappointed. His writing is clever and concise with a refreshing tone of wit throughout. This novel was a little bit more serious than the other novels I had read but still maintained an optimistic note of techno-optimism throughout. The worldbuilding is well done on the large and small scale, it is obvious that a lot of thought went into thinking about the disease symptoms and technological consequences. The narrative is involved with the technical and political ramifications but does not devolve into heavy-handed exposition. The world felt natural through the eyes of the characters who were themselves fun and enjoyable people to spend some time with.
The discussion of the partisan political debate as government considers decreasing funding that previously went to Haden’s research and healthcare for the victims is in the background of the novel with characters reacting in understandable personally motivated ways. I find it unlikely in the current political climate that the imagined bi-partisan effort could have unified behind spending the billions of dollars necessary to support the technology development and special treatment of the victims in the first place. And I also find it highly unlikely that if such technology as the neural network were available that it would be possible to restrict it only to victims of Haden’s. It is also strange to me that the use of Integrators is allowed, it seems to me the ethics of having a brain network implanted in your mind expressly for the purpose of allowing a locked-in individual to inhabit your body would be the subject of a heated debate. Most importantly the technology is handled with respect. The presentation of neural net coding and the security flaws, obsolescence and software development process described were refreshingly believable from a technical standpoint. I basically squealed with joy at the plausible description of the exploitation of a security flaw and the description of how it was accomplished and the resultant deployment of a security patch.
It is to the author’s credit that I didn’t realize until reading the discussion about it, but the main character, Chris Shane’s gender is never mentioned throughout the book. As expected I just kind of assumed that he was a white male, but that is mostly because I am a white male, I know Scalzi is a white male and I listened to the audiobook narrated by Wil Wheaton who is also a white male. There is another version of the audiobook narrated by Amber Benson for this reason. Looking back on the novel it makes sense that since Chis doesn’t inhabit his own body for most of his life that he doesn’t associate strongly with gender.
The plot is that of an exciting action-thriller with clever twists and turns and it holds together until the end when the motivations and execution of the overarching plot turn on a comically implausible super-villain economics. Other than that it was a refreshing quick and exciting read. It manages to accomplish two things very well. It provides a framework to explore concepts of self and identity while giving us a diverse cast of characters and a fun and engaging plot that manages to stay lighthearted and endearing throughout.
The Hero of Ages by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
The Hero of Ages is the conclusion to the first Mistborn trilogy, neatly wrapping up all the elements of the world introduced in the past two books and tying everything together with a neat and tidy bow. This is an example of Sanderson’s ability to take all the little world-building details of his work and tying everything together with almost obsessive consistency. There are no loose plot threads, everything comes together in the conclusion and elements introduced along the way that you didn’t even realize were mysteries are revealed. This attention to detail and care for consistency and conclusion make this novel stand out despite its other flaws.
*Spoilers Final Empire and Well of Ascension*
After the conclusion of the second book, Eland has been left in charge of the largest part of the remains of the misnamed Final Empire with Vin at his side and the world coming to an end around them as the manifestation of deific power called Ruin was released from its prison in the Well of Ascension. Can they unite humanity in the face of the dangers of the world and will Vin be able to fulfill the role of the Hero of Ages as foretold by the pre-Emipre religion?
The book reflects on what religious truth means and explores both the struggle between faith and logic and the way religious beliefs can quickly diverge from truth when shaped by individual perceptions. Sanderson presents religious fanaticism as an obstacle that keeps people who share the world with a deific being intent on destroying everything from working together to save the world. We are shown elements of radical Survivor-ism worshiping Kelsier and dragging the world to Ruin in one city and elements of what is left of the Lord Ruler’s organized church struggling to preserve the status quo which also poses a threat to the forces trying to fight Ruin directly to save the world. It is also interesting to see the take on the prophetically ordained savior, as the words of the past are filtered through falsehood by the passage of time and the twisting influence of Ruin. I am always wary of the prophecy trope but I think that it was applied with sufficient subtlety in this case.
I appreciated the way that the human antagonists were humanized. We are given glimpses into the mind of the Lord Ruler that almost redeem the way he oppressed the people and polluted the world. And Yoman is an excellent addition as a foil for Eland with his faith in the Lord Ruler motivating his resistance. However the conclusion is also hampered by the true villain being an elemental force of god-power whose sole goal is encapsulated in his name: Ruin is as stereotypical evil destructive force with no nuance and sympathy, which makes him an uninspiring antagonist.
The craft of writing is not Sanderson’s best here, the text is rendered in clear and usually invisible standard American english, but there are a few times that jarring use of modern colloquialism or word choice stood out for me as harmful to the tone of the setting. But overall I enjoy the clean and workmanlike translation of the world into simple standard language though the dialog is occasionally awkward and unrealistic, particularly when working with group scenes.
Overall the characterization has improved, you get a good sense of the different characters insecurities and their progression to dealing with changing circumstances. The characters each have their journeys. Eland has grown so much, and Vin has managed to transition out of her angsty teenage phase, but they still feel a little lackluster. Of particular positive note in this story are Sazed, Spook, and TenSoon’s character progressions, they all carry their parts of the story very well.
Ultimately this book does an excellent job of concluding all the threads in the series and providing an epic showdown of humanity in the face of apocalypse. But it still manages to not live up to the first book. All of the characters are shown with heavy doubts, which weigh them down as they face their all-powerful foe, but they lack the will and charisma that Kelsier had while he stared certain death in the face, laughed and carried on his a plan to survive anyway. It is understandable that Kelsier is worshipped in this world, but it is sad that his direct followers spend most of their time wallowing in self-doubt and following the plans of those that came before them to try to fix the world. They are interesting characters, and it is to their credit that they keep fighting even in the face of their doubts, but it just lacks the spark of will that Kelsier carried.
It was sad to say goodbye to this world on such a final note, but that sorrow is much alleviated by the existence of Alloy of Law and the continuation of the Mistborn world in the second era novels that follow after it which are excellent in their own right and benefit immensely from being grounded in the lore established in this trilogy.
MaddAddam by Margaret Atwood
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Oryx and Crake, the first book in the Maddaddam Trilogy, isolated it’s protagonist Jimmy with his experiences, guilt, regrets and memories. The Year of the Flood also isolated it’s protagonists with their wounds and consequences. MaddAddam brings them all together and they need each other to survive. This novel is about relationships and healing. About synthesis bringing disparate elements together in the face of external threat to meet shared goals. Jimmy alone is sick and weak and unable to take care of himself, he needs help from others to survive. Toby is strong and capable but she still needs others to lean on to pull herself out of depression and inaction. Ren and Amanda need others around them to hold up to the pressures of the world and put themselves back together after their traumatic experiences. And most of all the genetically engineered and naive Crakers need some of the knowledge and interpretation of the apocalypse that destroyed humanity to survive.
Even now after the apocalypse in the ashes of society humanity has survived. Not just the God’s Gardeners, MaddAddamites, Jimmy and the Crakers. Some of the worst of humanity have survived are criminals convicted of horrible crimes and forced to participate in the televised death-sport called Painball where they were encouraged to live in savagery and violence for the entertainment of others. Evil still exists and so in the Garden of Eden Crake created by killing the vast majority of the world the period of childhood for the Crakers is ended, bringing pain and suffering and confusion to their world. Can they encompass the changes in mindset to allow them to live in this world? Can they conceptualize evil and how will they react to it?
In the earlier books a numb acceptance of the debauchery of the world suffuses most of the world before the flood. People exist merely to survive amidst the corporate greed, hedonistic excess and rampant consumerism of the corporate controlled world with little to no eye on morality. There are no consequences before the flood for rapists, murderers, abusers and child molesters. Those that try to stand up to the weight of the direction of the world are beaten down and ridiculed, forced to segregate themselves and try to live unaffected by the world around them, but that isn’t tenable and everyone is tainted by the excess of the world. Zeb, Toby, Ren, Amanda. None of them are unaffected by the world around them. They are changed and broken by it but they take action to rise above.
MaddAddam also gives us more backstory about the world before the “waterless flood”, we learn more about Adam One and Zeb. The way everything is tied together with Zeb’s story being told to Toby as they grow an intimate relationship and her relaying parts of that story to the Crakers who integrate it into their nascent mythology is intricate and heartfelt. The petrobaptist megachurch/corporation is amusingly conceived if hyperbolic. Zeb and his comparison to Adam One is interesting and the parallels they go through in their development from beginning to end. The depiction of humanity at its most base, with Painball punishment, greedy religious leaders serving corporate interests and perverse sexual abuse enabled by technology is wearing. The parts of the old world that we are shown it is easy to see the desire to wipe it clean. The chance to make it right.
And Toby is given that chance through the Crakers as they come to her to continue the storytelling tradition that Jimmy established. Through this tradition we are given a glimpse into the power of storytelling as Toby realizes the effects that she is having on the innocent Crakers. She re-frames the story of their creation and the destruction of humanity to try to help them understand while also sheltering them from ideas that she thinks could corrupt them. She adds stories about Zeb to their mythology and uses the stories as a way to explain things the Crakers can’t conceptualize on their own. She gives them the gift of written language to help them remember the stories of the past.
I was a little conflicted by the coincidence that everyone that survived the epidemic was related to Jimmy’s past life. It made the story tightly woven and delightfully self-referential at times. But the implausibility shrank the scope of the world and weakened the impact of the disaster. If all these people survived just because they at one point dated Jimmy then it seems probable that large numbers of people who haven’t dated Jimmy have also survived and just not made it to the tiny geographic bounds explored in the novel.
In reading the other reviews on Goodreads for MaddAddam I found that many of them fell into two camps: those that worship Atwood unquestioningly and gave the book 5 stars with little thought to the why (frequently mentioning her as a pioneer of feminist literature) and others who also praised her for her feminism but criticized this book as a disappointment because it showed Toby, Ren and Amanda in weaker positions, Toby particularly is criticized as fawning over Zeb like a besotted schoolgirl. But these criticisms and praise seem to me to miss the central point of the story and the skill that Atwood has displayed in weaving characters and story together about so much more than just women being equal to men.
The Well of Ascension by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
*Spoilers Mistborn: the Final Empire*
In this second book of the Mistborn trilogy Kelsier’s crew of thieves and con-men have to figure out how to deal with success after deposing their totalitarian god-king. Now they have to rule in his place without his god-like powers or the stability granted by a thousand years of legitimacy. The empire is gone, fractured overnight into a collection of warring kingdoms and several of the most powerful warlords set out to conquer Luthadel, the capital city where Kelsier’s crew have set up their own attempt at government.
The tight pacing and plan-focused narrative drive of the first novel is replaced by a more reactionary plot as the characters adapt to roles in the fledgling government. The novel suffers some as the characters become less archetypal and more confused in their roles. It works from a plot perspective, and the characters need to be unsure of themselves as they try to adapt from being revolutionaries to ruling. But the transitions character arcs mean that we are stuck in transition with some awkwardly presented characterization as they try to change to their new situation.
The siege of Luthadel as the neighboring kings come to claim the wealth of the empire and compete for the legitimacy of holding the old capital city. This siege is a central point of the plot but it hangs over the story without urgency and the effects are rarely felt as the characters work on resolving internal conflicts. The same lack of urgency plagues the mystery presented by evidence that a shape-shifting Kandra has infiltrated the group. The effort to address either of these issues is sporadic and drawn out with long gaps between attempts to deal with these issues as other character points become more pressing. Both conflicts are played as plot points and feel artificially paced to resolve at the end of the story and are drawn out in time to allow the other events to occur. Instead of the characters having a clear goal that they are working towards with a plan which is challenged the plot hinges around characters trying to meet the demands of their situation from one state of mind and needing to move to a state of mind where they can take actions to change the situation.
That said. The mysteries that are revealed as the plot unfolds are very interesting and the book manages to transition the arc of the whole trilogy from the setting establishing work of the Final Empire to the events of Hero of Ages, moving to a completely different phase of the world with impressive escalation of urgency and scope. I really enjoyed Vin’s interactions with the Kandra OreSeur as she takes over his contract and works with him. And Sazed is solid in this story as he holds the group together with his conviction and faith in the individual members of the crew and the goal that they are trying to accomplish. His knowledge of religions and the exploration into the background of the Lord Ruler and the ancient religion of Terris are some of the best parts of the book tying into the mystery and depth of the setting in unexpected and satisfying ways.
One of the themes that comes up frequently in Sanderson’s books is the reflection on what it means to be a leader and how to handle the responsibility of ruling. This is often a secondary theme to the explorations about the process of deification and the conversation is sometimes a little confused by his mixing of the two. Deification and the qualities needed to rule rightly are not always granted to the same people in his body of work: we are definitely shown gods who do not have the qualities that make a good ruler and we are shown simple men who learn how to rule at least with a modicum of wisdom, but those same simple men are frequently rewarded in the text by the gift of godlike powers as a consequence which can cheapen the qualities that made them good rulers or lead them to make decisions that prove them to be not ready to rule at that level.
The Year of the Flood by Margaret Atwood
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
The Year of the Flood is the second book in Margaret Atwood’s MaddAddam post-apocalyptic trilogy. Set parallel to the events of the first book Oryx and Crake, The Year of the Flood gives us a different cast of characters and perspectives on the events leading up to the ‘Waterless Flood’ that wipes out most of humanity. Where Oryx and Crake gives a masculine viewpoint of power and agency, showing us the lives of two boys growing up in the Corporately controlled compounds where the wealthy, employed, scientifically and financially useful people of this pre-apocalypse dystopian society retreat, this book shows us the entwined lives of two women caught in the anarchic world of the overpopulated, under policed and dangerous world of the “pleeblands” outside the protected compounds.
Oryx and Crake showed us a world where humanity has been all but destroyed and a new breed of engineered beings have been given room to flourish. It is a tightly woven masterpiece that takes different storylines and weaves them together to the inevitable ending that we saw from the very beginning. Scenes from the main character Jimmy’s life after the apocalypse as he watches over the genetically engineered Crakers are interwoven with his childhood and life before the end of the world where he meets the boy who will take on the name Crake. Jimmy’s relationships with Crake (and Oryx) are slowly revealed alongside the mythologies that the Crakers have been creating around them. We get to watch as the hopelessness and danger of the old world is revealed to us, the horrible human excesses of greed and lust build at the same time as the danger and immediate needs of Jimmy in the future.
Oryx and Crake tells us the story of the apocalypse. The Year of the Flood uses that story as the basis to get us invested in the lives of survivors who are not directly related to the cause of the ‘Flood’ as we are given a similarly masterful interweaving of characters and timelines that builds on each other and the knowledge we have from the first book to take us deeper into how the apocalypse happens.
The second book took me longer to get into than Oryx and Crake, the hook of the mystery “how did this disaster happen” had already been explained and I was able to predict from the past narrative structure that I would have to wait till the very end of the book to get the answer to “what happens after the last scene of book one”. But I think the larger problem was that I had an easier time associating with the more familiar viewpoint of Jimmy than with the female protagonists of book two. This was a problem with myself and once I was able to acknowledge it I was able to more firmly immerse myself in the story. I was hooked throughout by Atwood’s excellent writing, her ability to craft beautiful prose is a wonder to watch. But after the initial struggle to get into the story what kept my interest was the different perspectives: the pleebland slum life vs the wealthy corps compounds from book one, the environmentalist cult compared to the technocracy and the female perspective compared to the male.
In both books the characters are passive observers to the world gone to hell and to the clinical madness and intensity of Crake and the fiery anger of Zeb and the calm collected preparations of Adam One. Jimmy was used but always had options open to him. But Tobey and Ren, the main viewpoints of the Year of the Flood are dragged around by forces outside their control as they try to maintain a level of safety and identity. The viewpoints are whole and vibrant, motivated by past fears and present worries, broken people trying to make the best of the world they are in while being trapped in their own cycles of action and inaction.
There is, as in the first book a strong current of sexual abuse running through the story. In the first book Jimmy and Crake watch porn and fantasize about one of the victimized children, Jimmy casually uses women for sex and then discards them by refusing them emotional engagement. Oryx herself is almost entirely created from Jimmy and Crake’s fantasies to serve them. In the Year of the Flood sexual violence, rape and threat of death force Tobey to join the Gardener’s, and is implicit in Ren’s work as a exotic dancer. This more refined level of sexual threat and danger is then washed away by the flood and the surviving women face the prospect of navigating a more brutal world where physically stronger men hunt them for entertainment.
Notable amount of detail and energy in this book goes into the doctrines and teachings of the environmentalist cult that Tobey and Ren find themselves involved in. The God’s Gardeners are a strange collection of transcendental thought, buddhist and christian theology and postmodern environmentalism. From the way they are treated in the story I am not sure if they are supposed to be respected or ridiculed. But they are certainly interesting.
It might be easy to discount this novel as a weaker entry than Oryx and Crake with its more passive actors, the lack of mystery and involvement in the actions that caused the apocalypse. To discount it for these things however would be to miss the power it has in showing the underside of this world. We see other perspectives that make us rethink things we have already seen: we are shown Jimmy’s misuse of women from the perspective of several of his girlfriends, we are shown a more respectful take on Amanda’s art and the God’s Gardeners than Jimmy’s narrow-minded dismissal. The marginalized voices once drowned in the noise of power and money can be heard after the old structures of the world are washed away.
Mistborn: The Final Empire by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Set in a world dominated by ash-falls from volcanic eruptions Mistborn: the Final Empire takes place a thousand years after the evil emperor established his oppressive dictatorial regime. In this heavy-handed feudal society a band of thieves and con-men come together and arrange a heist to steal the treasury of the immortal Lord Ruler and take down the empire.
Staged as heist story the premise is delightful by itself and could be entertaining on its own with solid execution, a suitable plan and entertaining characters, which this book has. But Mistborn doesn’t content itself to leave the story there; it goes farther, wrapping mysteries of world, religion and cosmology around the clever magic mechanics, con-artistry, political manipulations, and clever sleight-of-hand heist planning. The execution of the plan sets off a cascade of events that leads to an escalating sense of urgency and raised stakes that builds throughout the novel culminating in a carefully balanced explosion of success and failure and satisfyingly inevitable plot-turns.
This novel shows Sanderson growing in his ability to develop characters. The characters are larger than life, with extreme manifestations of loyalty, courage and ego, but they are personally motivated in ways that the characters in Elantris were not. Kelsier is one of my favorite Sanderson characters, motivated by past trauma and proceeding to action with his particular mix of suicidally ambitious planning, determination and a rock hard core of anger. Vin’s character progression is grounded by her change in situation and while the transition is probably too easy we want to believe that she can overcome her deep-seated distrust of neglect and betrayal because she is made of heroic stuff. Her scars are never ignored throughout, nor are Kelsier’s, they motivate tension with others and the world around them that they react and respond to with varying levels of heroic success and failure. They are not the deepest or most realistic characters, but they are heroic, grounded in their personal stories and motivated to action.
Sanderson is not a flowery writer. I enjoy the works of a masterful prose-crafter from time to time, but I generally prefer an unobtrusive style that gets out of the way. In this book Sanderson does that well: the writing is simple; the language is clear. It doesn’t dazzle, but it certainly doesn’t get in the way.
What this novel does particularly well is set up an imaginative and detailed world with deeply thought out magic with ecological, sociological, political and religious consequences and excellently pacing the introduction to the world and to the magic system. Everything hangs together and in the end the history of the world, the character motivation and action, the mechanics of the magic system and the cosmology all come together for a very satisfying conclusion.